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Rate My Poem Please!
« Thread Started on Nov 15, 2005, 1:35am »
Sonnet for The Song


My search began with tales I'd heard
About a poem of epic size
Where authors weighed each written word
Hearts bared without prosaic guise.

So I did trek o'er ennui's plain
Each footstep snared by free verse vines
Perhaps my quest was all in vain
For rhythmic words in metered lines.

But 'lo, upon horizon's rim
There grows a shape, sweet to the eye
And 'round it's trunk or 'neath each limb
Were poem seekers such as I.

From every land and every clime
Came soul-mates, sharing thoughts in rhyme.


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Re: Rate My Poem Please!
« Reply #1 on Nov 15, 2005, 9:30am »
I'm sorry, but i love this poem!
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Re: Rate My Poem Please!
« Reply #2 on Nov 15, 2005, 2:05pm »
Thanks alot!
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We come to love not by finding a perfect person, but by learning to see an
imperfect person perfectly.
-XcAL
There is fate, but it can only take you so far because once you are there,
it's up to you to make it happen.
-XcAL
It is the mark of an educated mind to be able to entertain a thought without accepting it.
-Aristotle
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Re: Rate My Poem Please!
« Reply #3 on Nov 19, 2005, 1:40am »
Me too! X, you are doing outstanding work.
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Re: Rate My Poem Please!
« Reply #4 on Nov 26, 2005, 11:17pm »
XcAL, You Rock Da Verbage, Dude....WHOA!!!
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Re: Rate My Poem Please!
« Reply #5 on Dec 23, 2005, 11:42am »
I really liked this poem, very well written, I enjoyed reading this poem.
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Re: Rate My Poem Please!
« Reply #6 on Jan 8, 2006, 8:30pm »
This is a sweet sweet poem.
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Re: Rate My Poem Please!
« Reply #7 on May 28, 2006, 5:20pm »
Thanks all for the input ;)
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We come to love not by finding a perfect person, but by learning to see an
imperfect person perfectly.
-XcAL
There is fate, but it can only take you so far because once you are there,
it's up to you to make it happen.
-XcAL
It is the mark of an educated mind to be able to entertain a thought without accepting it.
-Aristotle
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Re: Rate My Poem Please!
« Reply #8 on May 31, 2006, 11:02am »
The poem is very nice...... Has a happy rhythm
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Re: Rate My Poem Please!
« Reply #9 on Jun 6, 2006, 1:55am »
Thanks alot cass.
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We come to love not by finding a perfect person, but by learning to see an
imperfect person perfectly.
-XcAL
There is fate, but it can only take you so far because once you are there,
it's up to you to make it happen.
-XcAL
It is the mark of an educated mind to be able to entertain a thought without accepting it.
-Aristotle
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Re: Rate My Poem Please!
« Reply #10 on Mar 31, 2008, 5:45am »
This poem is amazing and an absolute delight to read
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Re: Rate My Poem Please!
« Reply #11 on Sept 4, 2008, 3:32pm »
As if I walk into a lyrical garden, each word shines beautifully as my eyes glance on it. It is very sweet and pretty!
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Re: Rate My Poem Please!
« Reply #12 on Feb 17, 2009, 8:02pm »
NICE MUSIC OF POETRY
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