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Post by b4sunset on Jun 17, 2010 15:19:42 GMT -5
drunk are the waters reflecting the dusk of your sleeves. a bright palette of pastels soaking moonlight’s groan on beads of stars. i ride
in another world where flute of forests thirst twice, mirrors of roses reflecting kisses fueled by night’s hunger; we both burn nenette Short Form Poem of The Week
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Jun 17, 2010 15:23:10 GMT -5
wonderful tanka poetry!
what a joy to read this, thanks for posting!
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Post by Rose on Jun 17, 2010 15:37:48 GMT -5
outstanding b4!
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Post by Carin on Jun 18, 2010 15:12:30 GMT -5
well-done b4!
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Post by b4sunset on Jun 21, 2010 13:41:10 GMT -5
Super thanks, lisa.. hugggs to you..
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Post by b4sunset on Jun 21, 2010 13:42:10 GMT -5
Rose, really challenging but fun to do tankas! thanks...
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Post by b4sunset on Jun 21, 2010 13:42:52 GMT -5
Great to have you here, carin.. thanks loads!
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Post by Bob on Jun 25, 2010 0:29:22 GMT -5
excellent tanka Nenette!
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Post by ciara on Jun 25, 2010 1:54:45 GMT -5
wonderful tanka poetry Nenette!
my deepest of congrats to you!
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Post by percy on Jun 25, 2010 2:47:42 GMT -5
;D congrats to you, great tanka poems [/size][/color]
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Post by Joan on Jun 25, 2010 5:04:36 GMT -5
CONGRATS![/color][/size]
great poem!
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Post by Alicia on Jun 25, 2010 6:42:27 GMT -5
congrats Nenette, I was pulling for this one, great write
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Post by Tamika on Jun 25, 2010 7:01:40 GMT -5
:-[Congrats ;D[/color][/size] great tanka
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Post by Sierra on Jun 25, 2010 8:05:39 GMT -5
congrats, lovely write!
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Post by Cherrie on Jun 26, 2010 1:41:46 GMT -5
congrats Nenette, well-done!
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