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Post by b4sunset on Jul 8, 2010 15:46:52 GMT -5
after office, after soaking wheat fields with thimbles of sun, after cupping earned bills, the street at 6 pm sprays dust upon feet much too slow for a drink of a night dance… faces soaked with screeches of wagon pull, lips sketching the torn hems of soles filtering crushed catty clouds from patches of lusty winds massaging as many cramped necks delicate in the changing floors of horse-drawn heavy hours..
somehow…daybreak leaps to resurrect a frail call of the flute to purr, pulsate, permit waltzed pauses of wildflower daze..
gradually.. a petticoat of stars and some tangy vapor restore the voice of passion, a slice of love the pinkness of recklessness to thrust upon nerve endings for an evening of melody only the same stars and vapor can behold: city guards bow to spill scarlet of nirvana hails among passers-by, arms sway with a cabaret of guitars, traffic blood gyrates with the yeast and keg of beer. and the deck of evening finally aligns with the gods’ decree to halt wagons, dust and wheels from rolling, rolling. after work, friday softens both stars and vapor much too thirsty for a last night dance. [/font] [/color] nenette
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Jul 8, 2010 18:45:52 GMT -5
this write stirs the senses in a beautiful way
excellent writing, Nenette
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Post by Jay on Jul 9, 2010 1:28:09 GMT -5
great poem CONGRATS [/color][/size]
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Post by Tamika on Jul 9, 2010 1:55:12 GMT -5
congrats
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Post by Carin on Jul 9, 2010 7:28:03 GMT -5
congrats b4
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Post by Reggie on Jul 9, 2010 8:14:42 GMT -5
Congratulations Nenette [/size][/color]
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Post by sunny on Jul 9, 2010 20:18:29 GMT -5
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Post by Alicia on Jul 10, 2010 1:51:50 GMT -5
Congrats to you [/size][/color]
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Post by b4sunset on Jul 12, 2010 2:35:35 GMT -5
Thanks for the cheers, lisa.. hopw for friday went real well..
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Post by b4sunset on Jul 12, 2010 2:36:31 GMT -5
Liking the wishes you sent my way, jay... the best to you!!
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Post by b4sunset on Jul 12, 2010 2:37:20 GMT -5
Tami: so good to hear from you.. love it!! smiles and hugggs..
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Post by b4sunset on Jul 12, 2010 2:41:18 GMT -5
WAS FRIDAY A TRHILLING ONE, ALL?? I TRIED TO CHECK OUT THE TOTAL LUNAR ECLIPSE BUT I DON"T THINK IT COULDN'T BE SEEN IN MY AREA.. ANYWAY, I HAD FUN!! cheerios!! :-\
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Post by b4sunset on Jul 12, 2010 10:10:59 GMT -5
Carin: blessed to have you here.. thank you!
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Post by b4sunset on Jul 15, 2010 13:44:42 GMT -5
REggie: how nice of you to come by.. thanks!
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Post by b4sunset on Jul 15, 2010 13:46:44 GMT -5
Sunny pal,,, love the wway you cheer me up.. it's friday again!! huggss!
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