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Post by Lily on Sept 28, 2010 1:14:26 GMT -5
Angelic Breeze
birth of sun angelic breeze ocean crest marine-blue sky wind caress chilled wine and cheese oceanfront morning picnic
©Lily [/size][/center] ***this is my first Whitney
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Post by percy on Sept 28, 2010 1:32:40 GMT -5
a great first Whitney Lily!
hope to read more from you!
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Sept 28, 2010 2:58:48 GMT -5
Really Lily, this is your first Whitney poem?
This is hard to believe... fantastic job
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Post by Bob on Sept 28, 2010 4:55:41 GMT -5
I cannot believe this is your first Whiney, super job Lily!
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Post by Cherrie on Sept 28, 2010 7:34:07 GMT -5
wonderful poem Lily!
keep then coming!
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Post by Lily on Sept 28, 2010 7:37:09 GMT -5
a great first Whitney Lily! hope to read more from you! thanks so much Percy
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Post by Lily on Sept 28, 2010 7:38:08 GMT -5
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Post by Lily on Sept 28, 2010 7:39:22 GMT -5
I cannot believe this is your first Whiney, super job Lily! ;D so much Bob, I appreciate you much
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Post by Lily on Sept 28, 2010 7:42:25 GMT -5
wonderful poem Lily! keep then coming! \ thanks Cherrie
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Post by johan on Sept 28, 2010 9:31:05 GMT -5
Your first Whitney, well lily it shouldn't be your last, just great.
Andrew
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Post by Joan on Sept 28, 2010 12:33:22 GMT -5
wow, this is fantastic Lily!
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Post by Lola on Sept 28, 2010 14:28:39 GMT -5
beautifully written Lily...a solid first try!
keep em coming!
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Post by bridge on Sept 28, 2010 14:46:11 GMT -5
wow, this is great writing Lily!!!
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Post by Tamika on Sept 28, 2010 15:02:44 GMT -5
love it!
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Post by Eddie on Sept 28, 2010 22:30:14 GMT -5
fantastic Whitney poem
I do hope you write more of these dear lady
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