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Post by Lisa Arnold on Oct 27, 2010 1:00:05 GMT -5
MOON VEIL
ferocious winds churn ocean waves swallow calm opaque clouds veil moon
©2010 Lisa Arnold[/size]
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Post by Betty on Oct 27, 2010 1:05:12 GMT -5
Lisa, this is excellent. I love every word
strong imagery, great job
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Post by ciara on Oct 27, 2010 1:16:11 GMT -5
a solid ku and vivid imagery...very well-done Lisa
much enjoyed the read
keep up the great work
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Post by Reggie on Oct 27, 2010 2:25:17 GMT -5
::)a fine ku Lisa, I always love your poems
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Post by Joan on Oct 27, 2010 3:20:07 GMT -5
beautifully writen Lisa!
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Post by Tamika on Oct 27, 2010 7:25:29 GMT -5
super fantastic dear Lisa, I love it!
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Post by trina on Oct 27, 2010 7:32:51 GMT -5
perfection Lisa and you have used strong imagery to illustrate the theme of this great ku!
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Post by Brian on Oct 27, 2010 8:34:03 GMT -5
beautiful Lisa...enjoyed!
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Oct 27, 2010 8:37:38 GMT -5
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Oct 27, 2010 8:38:30 GMT -5
;D dear Ciara
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Oct 27, 2010 8:40:16 GMT -5
than you so much Reg
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Oct 27, 2010 8:41:39 GMT -5
;D dear Trina, love ya much
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Oct 27, 2010 8:43:33 GMT -5
super fantastic dear Lisa, I love it! thanks so much for stopping by Tami
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Oct 27, 2010 8:44:54 GMT -5
beautiful Lisa...enjoyed! Hey Brian, good to see you here and thanks so much for your kind words
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Post by Silent-One on Oct 27, 2010 10:37:36 GMT -5
a real gem Lisa!
thanks for posting!
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