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Post by b4sunset on Dec 7, 2010 0:26:06 GMT -5
we sit for an hour rising and falling with daffodils and salty marbles below some kind of clouds yellow and topaz forming. like buddha lotus, the absence of attaching our earthly flesh to the miracle of unnamed trees simply gathering a dance of imagination swell in unknown closeness and openness of souls painting winds together. sometimes in silence, we speak with words unthreaded by aura eyes blue and true as dusk breath.
we need not ramble in paraphrases of this late dusk canticle, the orchestra of flowered fingers sustain the magic of such hour’s sonata. how deftly ink and fireglow understand our same rhymes, our same wafting waves as gentle as paper- thin stems jutting out from our palms… together, we see the stillness of company from the same face. and if our skin doesn’t split in the peeling of snow cheeks, it’s because… we have been friends before time was ever born nenette
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Post by heart2heart on Dec 7, 2010 0:39:01 GMT -5
Some times words are not necessary, I am blown over by the beauty and marvel of this gorgeous poem. Katriona
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Post by johan on Dec 7, 2010 6:31:46 GMT -5
You write from the heart Nenette and this shows in your excellent poetry, always consistent and always poetry that the reader can identify with, once again, beautifully presented and written and a joy to read.
Andrew
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Dec 7, 2010 9:12:39 GMT -5
wonderful poem, Nenette, thanks for the fantastic read this morning
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Post by rrw on Dec 7, 2010 10:41:55 GMT -5
Though sophisticated, still rings with a soft, childlike awe at the joy of living... wonderful expression of friendship... and hope. great job, B-4.
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Post by b4sunset on Dec 8, 2010 1:56:53 GMT -5
thanks dear kat for being withme on this one! hugggs..
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Post by b4sunset on Dec 8, 2010 1:57:54 GMT -5
Andrew, jus felt this simplivity of feelings and whiffed away... glad you passed by! ;D
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Post by b4sunset on Dec 8, 2010 1:58:46 GMT -5
Oh lisa, always a pleasure to hear from you.. have a great day, friend!
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Post by b4sunset on Dec 8, 2010 1:59:41 GMT -5
Robert, sometimes we do have these poetic moods.. so there! how right you are!! ;D
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Post by purplespirit on Dec 8, 2010 17:00:44 GMT -5
Overflowing with beauty and precious sentiments is this your poem Nenette, an awesome read leaving a warm touch in my heart, thank you! Ulla xx
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Post by rainbowrider on Dec 8, 2010 21:10:46 GMT -5
A sweet melody of words and images which touches that place, that quiet in the soul,
RR
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Post by b4sunset on Dec 8, 2010 21:47:48 GMT -5
sweet ulla, your comments always mystify me.. thank you for enjoying this one!! huggs to you..
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Dec 10, 2010 5:42:03 GMT -5
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Post by Tamika on Dec 10, 2010 7:12:50 GMT -5
CONGRATS, great write!
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Post by Treasure on Dec 10, 2010 7:42:39 GMT -5
love this, congrats!
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