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Apr 12, 2012 18:38:14 GMT -5
Post by percy on Apr 12, 2012 18:38:14 GMT -5
a good one Percy, I love these gems from you! thanks Lily
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Apr 12, 2012 18:39:43 GMT -5
Post by percy on Apr 12, 2012 18:39:43 GMT -5
thanks Reg, you always have a kind word for my poems
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Apr 12, 2012 18:42:01 GMT -5
Post by percy on Apr 12, 2012 18:42:01 GMT -5
many thanks Sierra
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Apr 12, 2012 21:41:09 GMT -5
Post by ciara on Apr 12, 2012 21:41:09 GMT -5
very nice, Percy!
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Apr 13, 2012 17:42:02 GMT -5
Post by Bob on Apr 13, 2012 17:42:02 GMT -5
love this one Percy!
one thing, I would interchange the words "broken" and "lost" in line 4...to make it read a bit smoother....just a thought, the choice is yours, of course...
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Apr 21, 2012 0:38:57 GMT -5
Post by percy on Apr 21, 2012 0:38:57 GMT -5
thanks Ciara
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Apr 21, 2012 0:40:30 GMT -5
Post by percy on Apr 21, 2012 0:40:30 GMT -5
love this one Percy!
one thing, I would interchange the words "broken" and "lost" in line 4...to make it read a bit smoother....just a thought, the choice is yours, of course... Hi Bob, thanls for commenting and for your suggestion, I think you are right...I will change it
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Apr 25, 2013 23:57:43 GMT -5
Post by risyerg on Apr 25, 2013 23:57:43 GMT -5
Exactly! Great piece! R.Y.
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Jun 1, 2013 9:18:03 GMT -5
Post by percy on Jun 1, 2013 9:18:03 GMT -5
thanks so much R.Y.
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Jun 2, 2013 9:16:36 GMT -5
Post by bridge on Jun 2, 2013 9:16:36 GMT -5
hey Percy, how did I MISS this one, sorry about that...great lanturne!
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Jun 12, 2013 16:22:01 GMT -5
Post by percy on Jun 12, 2013 16:22:01 GMT -5
many thanks, Dan!
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