my challenge to CD, and everyone

[sunny]

I am blue for you, my love!


I am blue, my love!
my blue is from the ocean of waves,
howling splashing of emotion ways
pouring all over me within storming paste!
I am passionately blue for you, my love!


I am blue, my love!
my blue is from the vast of the sky,
pure and endless of volume and lights,
spreading out edgeless love days and nights
I am breathlessly blue for you, my love!


I am blue, my love!
my blue is from all the mountain hills,
rolling timelessly till the horizon views
sipping and savoring with all sweet dews
I am dripping blue for you, my love!

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[tcn]

By Pagan Hands


Break; break from the preachers of despair,
join the liquidations of masses that travel
electric around space, chiming in unison about
lost quatrains. Their spiritual urgency created
by a primordial light where sanctuaries of prophesies
linger in spirals of white, Sabbath moon, tree of life.

Break; break from the remorse of dawn, the stain
of guilt that makes clock hands stick with savage servility
behind star drifts of forgotten connections. You're my
beautiful ransom in this bubble of metaphysics that
makes my heart beat faster and faster with the simple
devotion of your manic passion.

Break; break from those that hate, slithering as eels,
inside the grief of your soul. Dance! Dance upon the
pseudo rhetoric of their squall heads as you weep
for violets and blue forget-me-nots. There's a river that
ebbs and flows beneath the gangrene of your feet.
Let Earth rain as a soft voice calls you from afar.

A Wicca hand is typing these lines, waiting for your eyes
to take on the journey!

[cdlight]

I'm game time starts now
CD

[cdlight]

Feb 21, 2009 10:50:55 GMT -5 sunny said:

Some say true roses are red
But these are clearest blue
every tear you see right here
are times I’ve cried for you

The times we talked stargazing
You sprinkled me with hope
Through it all, we’ve grown so close
So much that we've eloped

Through love that we’ve created
Your pedals sweet caress
We’ve made three stars, each one ours
Thank God we’re richly blessed

[sunny]

Feb 21, 2009 12:18:38 GMT -5 tcn said:

By Pagan Hands


Break; break from the preachers of despair,
join the liquidations of masses that travel
electric around space, chiming in unison about
lost quatrains. Their spiritual urgency created
by a primordial light where sanctuaries of prophesies
linger in spirals of white, Sabbath moon, tree of life.

Break; break from the remorse of dawn, the stain
of guilt that makes clock hands stick with savage servility
behind star drifts of forgotten connections. You're my
beautiful ransom in this bubble of metaphysics that
makes my heart beat faster and faster with the simple
devotion of your manic passion.

Break; break from those that hate, slithering as eels,
inside the grief of your soul. Dance! Dance upon the
pseudo rhetoric of their squall heads as you weep
for violets and blue forget-me-nots. There's a river that
ebbs and flows beneath the gangrene of your feet.
Let Earth rain as a soft voice calls you from afar.

A Wicca hand is typing these lines, waiting for your eyes
to take on the journey!

like I have said that from other reply... to this poem... your poem is so breath taking! haunting! if I read few more time, I am sure my heart will stop ! --- for it take all the heart beats that one can ever have!
you are very good poet! thanks for sharing!

[sunny]

Feb 21, 2009 13:45:48 GMT -5 cdlight said:

Feb 21, 2009 10:50:55 GMT -5 sunny said:

Some say true roses are red
But these are clearest blue
every tear you see right here
are times I’ve cried for you

The times we talked stargazing
You sprinkled me with hope
Through it all, we’ve grown so close
So much that we've eloped

Through love that we’ve created
Your pedals sweet caress
We’ve made three stars, each one ours
Thank God we’re richly blessed

CD! so much fun with you! you are so gooooood! so fast!!! hug again! ok.. now I go write one ok... and ye, don't forget to think of a new topic will you CD?
thanks again!

[heart2heart]

Sorry, I'm a bit late, but here goes:

Midnight Rose

Exquisite midnight rose
Petals moist with tears
Soft and silken beauty
Dream not of your fears
Though autumn is calling
And summer must depart
Love's precious petals
Made imprints in my heart
Perhaps another autumn
When a peaceful fire glows
And rain is softly falling
I'll recall a sad blue rose.....

Heart2Heart

[sunny]

Feb 21, 2009 16:21:53 GMT -5 heart2heart said:

Sorry, I'm a bit late, but here goes:

Midnight Rose

Exquisite midnight rose
Petals moist with tears
Soft and silken beauty
Dream not of your fears
Though autumn is calling
And summer must depart
Love's precious petals
Made imprints in my heart
Perhaps another autumn
When a peaceful fire glows
And rain is softly falling
I'll recall a sad blue rose.....

Heart2Heart

Heart2heart! your poem can melt off the icy pile!!!and melt away reader's hearts! what a beautiful emotion!very soft and tenderness of your angelic touch!