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Post by cdlight on Mar 24, 2009 16:02:38 GMT -5
 I saw them together...but they were both great |
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Post by sunny on Mar 24, 2009 21:52:46 GMT -5
Empty RoadPink and yellow leafy shads
Fragrant and mellow yesterday
Laughter might still hang on trees
Smiling may absorb in dewy blades
Empty winding road silently fades
How many footsteps that once lay?
Lonesome breeze sighs out quietly
Could it glide tenderly the fallen flakes... |
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Post by cdlight on Mar 25, 2009 10:27:46 GMT -5
Another good write Sunny...you're developing a style about you.
CD
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Post by sunny on Mar 25, 2009 20:36:31 GMT -5
Another good write Sunny...you're developing a style about you. CD haaaa CD, really? I can not tell it by myself... maybe other people can see it but I don't know how to see it... but thanks for your encourage CD! I need to find a style!!!! haaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa   (when I was in painting class before... my teacher say the same to me too CD... and finally he find it for me before I can even see it... haaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa) |
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Post by immusie on Mar 26, 2009 6:28:09 GMT -5
He CallsAutumn leaves float with hues from God,
a hearts soul wonders in His awes....
a lane where only He can lead,
for only He knows of the seed
Yawning road, always be there,
all He want's is for us to share.
His love for us is in the tree's
forever calling in the breeze. |
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Post by sunny on Mar 26, 2009 7:11:39 GMT -5
His Glory
He blush his morning cheeks
Rises from the cloundy bed
Roaming on the land and creek
where all things still in rest
His fingers dipping with gold
touching all the trees and hills
all at once the earth shines gold
as if God's brilliant rope!
then he laughs and spread hopes
while rosy,pink leaves softly flow....
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Post by cdlight on Mar 28, 2009 15:27:11 GMT -5
nice job you two...
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Post by sunny on Mar 28, 2009 20:56:19 GMT -5
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Post by immusie on Mar 28, 2009 22:04:07 GMT -5
thank you CD..just a beautiful picture, but I am overly fond of Fall anyway.....
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Post by heart2heart on Mar 29, 2009 1:03:31 GMT -5
Normally autumn is my favourite season, but I'm so in anticipation of springtime this year, that my heart is not quite with me in this beautiful picture CD..... I see the glory of the image and it does inspire me to write these words:- FADING GLORY The sun descends behind the hill Its afterglow resplendent still Pure beauty to behold In hues of flame and gold In dark and leafy glades As autumn sadly fades The whisper of the gentle breeze Through bowers of graceful trees Etch oak and birch and fir Where sleepy creatures stir Owls and bats will soon take flight Enveloped in silent night While quietude descends And once more autumn ends..... PS: I walk along such an avenue of beautiful trees every day and each season the sight makes imprint in my heart. Heart2Heart  |
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Post by cdlight on Mar 29, 2009 2:02:26 GMT -5
well done Heart...
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Post by sunny on Mar 29, 2009 5:23:19 GMT -5
Heart2heart, I like your autumn sighs............mmmmmmmmmmm..... so very mellow and deep... so very loving and linger... I like that warm feeling filles up my heart as my eyes  through the words.. it rhymes very well, and flows with the theme to the end... very smooth and tasteful.. and now you also bring me new inspriation too... I guess we walk on this road never end! haaaa |
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Post by sunny on Mar 29, 2009 6:29:31 GMT -5
Oh! Lay Me DownOh! lay me down, lay me by your pinkish leaves, let my passions pour over your organic boides, long night the wind beats the nature bells softly and tenderly the leaves start to fell.... each leaf seems like each earthy thought behold with themes of story that talks flikering flames like embers fire they burn, born from the earth and home they return... quietly they land by the brown trees feet as if laying in the rosy duvet and sheet... Oh! lay me down! lay me by your leafy road, let my passions burn deep in your zelous soul![/b]
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Post by immusie on Apr 5, 2009 13:19:25 GMT -5
well h2h..if you come back...sorry I just now read your's have not been back to this one...but yours was beautiful my friend and I envy a walk like that....huggs...musie
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Post by moontear on Sept 16, 2009 3:15:06 GMT -5
 ~AUTUMN LEAVES~ Autumn leaves canopy the earth; Red, gold and orange watercolor palette; Picturesque spectrum of autumn's birth. Scarlet smiles beam on display, Nestled high in trees of crimson glory, Splashing beauty on an autumn day. Saffron eyes glisten through the trees; Golden-rod door to childhood dreams Winking at elders to play and run free. Citrus burst leaves of passion pirouette; Autumn recital dancing on a breeze Leaf to leaf ballet to a harvest duet. Red, gold and orange matrimony; Dazzling spectacle of God's fall creation; Autumn kaleidoscope of unity. © Karen Davies |
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(when I was in painting class before... my teacher say the same to me too CD... and finally he find it for me before I can even see it... haaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa)
through the words..
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time for me 
echoes, hope you all are doing well 
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