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Post by Lisa Arnold on Apr 12, 2010 5:47:19 GMT -5
AT RIVER’S EDGE
Echoes
broken, hollow
fall against fierce midnight winds
at river’s edge shadows are cast
storm’s rage has left its path
© Lisa Arnold
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Post by Betty on Apr 12, 2010 6:04:30 GMT -5
very good for your first one!
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Apr 12, 2010 6:11:07 GMT -5
thanks Betty!
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Post by sunny on Apr 12, 2010 6:30:48 GMT -5
Lisa, it is impressive! very good! i like it a lot!
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Post by Bob on Apr 12, 2010 9:47:08 GMT -5
very well done, Lisa! lots of imagination and a great effort  |
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Apr 12, 2010 17:13:49 GMT -5
thanks so much sunny  many thanks Bob |
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Post by moontear on Apr 13, 2010 1:48:54 GMT -5
Beautifully descriptive Lisa.
This is excellent for a first, great job, I love it!
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Apr 13, 2010 2:03:13 GMT -5
thanks so much Karen!
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Post by Helen on Apr 13, 2010 2:14:35 GMT -5
wonderful write, great imagery hard to believe this is your first pensee poem  |
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Post by Toni on Apr 13, 2010 3:01:50 GMT -5
good job, Lisa!
I never heard of this form before...
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Post by Brian on Apr 13, 2010 4:41:51 GMT -5
very good!
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Post by Jack on Apr 13, 2010 5:04:37 GMT -5
now this is a wonderful first try, good job!
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Apr 13, 2010 7:07:06 GMT -5
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Post by icee on Apr 14, 2010 2:13:35 GMT -5
this is is so good for a first poem of this type, great write!
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Apr 14, 2010 2:52:44 GMT -5
thanks icee!
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so much Helen, Toni, Brian and Jack 
all
time for me 
echoes, hope you all are doing well 
Hello everyone, sorry I have been away from the site so long but I was swamped with work 
Aug 5, 2021 14:19:11 GMT -5
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Hello everyone, sorry I have been away from the site so long but I was swamped with work 
Aug 5, 2021 14:19:11 GMT -5
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