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Post by moontear on Apr 13, 2010 1:52:58 GMT -5
DRINKING THE MOON ~ SENRYU
I drink early dawn,
plutonium aftertaste,
moon in my coffee.
© July 25, 2008 Karen Davies |
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Apr 13, 2010 2:01:00 GMT -5
love it, great job  |
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Post by Helen on Apr 13, 2010 2:12:01 GMT -5
great senryu!
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Post by Brian on Apr 13, 2010 4:43:10 GMT -5
a fine example of a senryu!
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Post by Jack on Apr 13, 2010 5:02:21 GMT -5
great one, moon!
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Post by Betty on Apr 13, 2010 6:53:02 GMT -5
very good write!
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Post by Kristi on Apr 17, 2010 7:35:35 GMT -5
oh this is lovely!
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Post by The Great Fulcanelli on Dec 30, 2011 6:54:12 GMT -5
Lovely imagery. I wonder what a plutonium aftertaste'd be like, but I guess I shouldn't.
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Post by michaelgallatin on Jan 1, 2012 9:24:09 GMT -5
 Very "cool", great poem and I love your pen-name. Take care, Mike 
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Post by paintedpostcards on Oct 25, 2012 12:03:38 GMT -5
 very nice I enjoyed the read
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Post by morningstar on Oct 30, 2012 20:55:24 GMT -5
Both of your poems are so beautiful--Drinking the Moon & Moon Tears.
Your expressions open the heart and heal the soul.
Much love
Morning Star
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Very "cool", great poem and I love your pen-name. 
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echoes, hope you all are doing well 
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