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Post by Lisa Arnold on Apr 13, 2010 6:48:50 GMT -5
 DAWN
birth of dawn awakens September
early morning orange-red sun
offers gentle warmth to earth's
green dew-covered lawns as
baby crows gather
in their warm nests
to feast on
juicy
worms
©2010 Lisa Arnold
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Post by Betty on Apr 13, 2010 6:56:03 GMT -5
very well done, I like it!!
I remember this on your site in a slightly different form...nice
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Post by bridge on Apr 13, 2010 7:01:11 GMT -5
another fine nonet, you write these well Lisa!
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Post by Rose on Apr 13, 2010 7:02:36 GMT -5
a beauty  thanks for sharing   |
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Apr 13, 2010 7:13:22 GMT -5
very well done, I like it!! I remember this on your site in a slightly different form...nice thanks Betty yeah it was one of my sites. I changed a few lines here and there |
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Apr 13, 2010 7:14:00 GMT -5
many thanks bridge and Rose!
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Post by Alicia on Apr 13, 2010 7:22:48 GMT -5
vivid imagery, you make it so easy for the reader to visualize your writing!
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Post by Jay on Apr 13, 2010 7:25:13 GMT -5
Hey Lisa, just popping in for a few minutes, gotta get to work...love this!!
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Post by Eddie on Apr 13, 2010 7:34:59 GMT -5
this is wonderfully penned, Lisa!
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Post by johan on Apr 13, 2010 7:41:25 GMT -5
Much enjoyed Lisa, I wrote a nonet a long time ago, but this one is perfect.
Johan
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Post by Cherrie on Apr 13, 2010 8:10:51 GMT -5
excellent Lisa!
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Apr 13, 2010 8:19:15 GMT -5
many thanks Alicia and Jay!
thanks so much Johan!
thanks Cherrie!
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Post by Silent-One on Apr 13, 2010 8:26:02 GMT -5
Lisa, my dear, I am so liking your nonet poems, another great one!
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Post by percy on Apr 13, 2010 8:35:04 GMT -5
love the entire poem!
these lines are great:
"birth of dawn awakens September
early morning orange-red sun"
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Post by Sierra on Apr 13, 2010 8:45:36 GMT -5
what a vivid write...I can see those cute little crows feasting on worms |
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and 
all
time for me 
echoes, hope you all are doing well 
