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Post by Lisa Arnold on Apr 11, 2010 1:30:40 GMT -5
CLOAK OF SHAME
broken children, innocence stolen
trapped behind the veil of blindness
stripped of all innocence
longing to be free from
heavy weight of guilt
and to erase
the dark cloak
of their
shame
©2010 Lisa Arnold
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Post by Betty on Apr 11, 2010 1:51:25 GMT -5
great form...it is rare that I see a nonet posted...well done!!
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Post by Rose on Apr 11, 2010 1:55:20 GMT -5
deep theme and so very well presented, excellent nonet, Lisa!
it is a treat to read a nonet poem here, thanks!
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Post by johan on Apr 11, 2010 3:06:01 GMT -5
A very good example Lisa.
Johan
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Post by bridge on Apr 11, 2010 3:27:12 GMT -5
a fantastic nonet, a rare find these days!
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Post by trina on Apr 11, 2010 3:32:22 GMT -5
an important subject and so very well expressed, a fine nonet!
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Apr 11, 2010 5:35:40 GMT -5
thanks so much Betty, Rose, Johan, Dan and Trina  I appreciate the comments and the reads  |
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Post by Eddie on Apr 11, 2010 5:49:00 GMT -5
perfect nonet, great write!
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Post by Lola on Apr 11, 2010 5:54:36 GMT -5
deep in meaning and well crafted, perfection!
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Post by Brian on Apr 11, 2010 5:57:29 GMT -5
one of my favorite nonet poems by you!
great job!
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Apr 11, 2010 6:04:53 GMT -5
thanks so much Eddie, Lola and Brian!
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Post by ciara on Apr 11, 2010 6:12:58 GMT -5
oh my, this is wonderful writing, sensitive but an important theme, great job as always, Lisa!
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Post by Dana on Apr 11, 2010 6:20:48 GMT -5
your talent is brimming this week, another great poem, plese keep them coming!
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Post by Billy on Apr 11, 2010 6:26:59 GMT -5
the muses are shining on you my dear lady with this amazing write!
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Apr 11, 2010 6:33:59 GMT -5
oh my, this is wonderful writing, sensitive but an important theme, great job as always, Lisa!  ciara |
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ciara 
and 
all
time for me 
echoes, hope you all are doing well 
