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Post by Lisa Arnold on Apr 8, 2010 3:50:46 GMT -5
great flow, emotion and tone in your poem, good write! Harry, thank you so kindly sir...it always good to hear from you
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Apr 8, 2010 3:52:05 GMT -5
dear Cherrie
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Apr 8, 2010 3:53:29 GMT -5
this is a gem of a poem! love these lines: "scattered footsteps caked in mud"
[/i][/quote] It is so kind of you to comment on my poem, Ken
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Post by Brian on Apr 8, 2010 4:25:37 GMT -5
very well done, Lisa!
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Post by icee on Apr 8, 2010 4:30:20 GMT -5
crisp imagery used in this write, great job!
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Post by Bob on Apr 8, 2010 5:10:05 GMT -5
beautiful writing here Lisa!
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Post by Joan on Apr 8, 2010 5:30:28 GMT -5
bravo, Lisa!
what a treat to be graced with two poems by you this week, love it!
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Apr 8, 2010 10:34:42 GMT -5
many thanks Brian, icee, Bob and Joan!
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Post by Lola on Apr 8, 2010 10:43:39 GMT -5
a fine write enhanced with great imagery...also it has great meaning.
enjoyed every word!
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Apr 8, 2010 14:38:04 GMT -5
Hello Lola,
thanks so much for commnenting and for the read!
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Post by Treasure on Apr 8, 2010 20:28:52 GMT -5
excellent write, Lisa!
so good to read your words again, hope there will be more!
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Post by Reggie on Apr 8, 2010 20:36:29 GMT -5
beautiful writing as always Lisa!
Love it!!
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Post by Jay on Apr 8, 2010 20:48:44 GMT -5
Lisa, you have won me over with this write..great job!
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Apr 8, 2010 22:12:08 GMT -5
excellent write, Lisa! so good to read your words again, hope there will be more! treasure Thnaks for asking, I hope to post more often
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Apr 8, 2010 22:13:02 GMT -5
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