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Post by Lisa Arnold on May 26, 2010 11:05:52 GMT -5
thanks bunches Tamika!
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Post by Eddie on Jan 15, 2011 12:38:01 GMT -5
marvelous Lisa! I loved this one again!
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Jan 15, 2011 12:47:58 GMT -5
thanks Eddie!
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Post by Eddie on Jan 15, 2011 12:48:48 GMT -5
you are welcome Lisa!
have a great weekend queen!
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Post by rico on Jan 15, 2011 13:00:04 GMT -5
love it Lisa!
great change to the end!
"broken soul seeks sanctuary from weight of life's misery
another dawn awakens offering mercy of rescue"
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Jan 15, 2011 13:52:23 GMT -5
you are welcome Lisa! have a great weekend queen! thanks so much Eddie
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Post by Carin on Jan 15, 2011 15:33:00 GMT -5
I love the change Lisa, makes me hopeful, great piece!
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Post by Sara on Jan 15, 2011 22:50:15 GMT -5
excellent write Lisa!
I love the lush imagery such as these opening parts:
"moans from vacant soul beckon in the wind
midnight skyline moonlit glow"
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Jan 16, 2011 1:49:09 GMT -5
love it Lisa! great change to the end! "broken soul seeks sanctuary from weight of life's misery
another dawn awakens offering mercy of rescue" many thanks Rico
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Jan 16, 2011 1:49:54 GMT -5
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Jan 16, 2011 1:50:38 GMT -5
excellent write Lisa! I love the lush imagery such as these opening parts: "moans from vacant soul beckon in the wind
midnight skyline moonlit glow" thanks Sara
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Post by Billy on Jan 16, 2011 4:20:16 GMT -5
phenomenal write Lisa!
it's great to read this one again thanks!
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Jan 16, 2011 11:32:36 GMT -5
thanks Billy!
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