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Charles Echoes Family Member Friend of Echoes It's me "blue" Posts: 605	GRACE OF STOLEN TIME Apr 6, 2010 4:54:55 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Charles on Apr 6, 2010 4:54:55 GMT -5 I agree with all of the others. this is a great poem!

Silent-One Echoes Family Member Friend of Echoes Riding The Waves Posts: 659	GRACE OF STOLEN TIME Apr 6, 2010 5:05:31 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Silent-One on Apr 6, 2010 5:05:31 GMT -5 oh yes, this is writing at its best thank you for posting and I hope this is the beginning of more to come
	Remembering where I was, so I will know where I am going...

Billy Echoes Senior Member Sara is my Princess! Friend of Echoes Posts: 441	GRACE OF STOLEN TIME Apr 6, 2010 5:30:13 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Billy on Apr 6, 2010 5:30:13 GMT -5 a soild write!
	I love my wife Sara and our two little darlings Samantha and Denise

Reggie Writing Prompt Moderator[/size] Friend of Echoes Posts: 1,400	GRACE OF STOLEN TIME Apr 6, 2010 5:34:56 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Reggie on Apr 6, 2010 5:34:56 GMT -5 I have read this before in a slightly different form, not here I don't think, but on another site. a most stirring and captivating write love this part: veil of tears shrouds bitter agony [/b]
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GRACE OF STOLEN TIME Apr 6, 2010 5:47:28 GMT -5

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Post by rico on Apr 6, 2010 5:47:28 GMT -5

I love your entire poem, but these lines stick out for me:

"ten below zero
snow on ground,
bed of asphalt,
stench of death
lingering in alleyway

innocence
shattered
sold precious
soul
for survival

veil of tears
shrouds
bitter
agony"

great poem!

Lisa Arnold Administrator Founder Belief is Power! Within a winter's shadow rests mourning's light"...the human soul cannot be permanently chained." - W.E.B. DuBois Believe in You! Posts: 16,456	GRACE OF STOLEN TIME Apr 6, 2010 6:03:11 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Lisa Arnold on Apr 6, 2010 6:03:11 GMT -5 Apr 6, 2010 4:54:55 GMT -5 Charles said: I agree with all of the others. this is a great poem! blue
	dreams echo within...

Lisa Arnold Administrator Founder Belief is Power! Within a winter's shadow rests mourning's light"...the human soul cannot be permanently chained." - W.E.B. DuBois Believe in You! Posts: 16,456	GRACE OF STOLEN TIME Apr 6, 2010 6:03:48 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Lisa Arnold on Apr 6, 2010 6:03:48 GMT -5 Apr 6, 2010 5:05:31 GMT -5 Silent-One said: oh yes, this is writing at its best thank you for posting and I hope this is the beginning of more to come so much Harry
	dreams echo within...

Lisa Arnold Administrator Founder Belief is Power! Within a winter's shadow rests mourning's light"...the human soul cannot be permanently chained." - W.E.B. DuBois Believe in You! Posts: 16,456	GRACE OF STOLEN TIME Apr 6, 2010 6:04:38 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Lisa Arnold on Apr 6, 2010 6:04:38 GMT -5 Apr 6, 2010 5:30:13 GMT -5 Billy said: a soild write! Billy, so nice of you to stop by and many thanks
	dreams echo within...

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GRACE OF STOLEN TIME Apr 6, 2010 6:05:32 GMT -5

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Post by Lisa Arnold on Apr 6, 2010 6:05:32 GMT -5

Apr 6, 2010 5:34:56 GMT -5 Reggie said:

I have read this before in a slightly different form, not here I don't think, but on another site.

a most stirring and captivating write

love this part:

veil of tears
shrouds
bitter
agony

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so much Reggie, I like that part too

dreams echo within...

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GRACE OF STOLEN TIME Apr 6, 2010 6:06:52 GMT -5

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Post by Lisa Arnold on Apr 6, 2010 6:06:52 GMT -5

Apr 6, 2010 5:47:28 GMT -5 rico said:

I love your entire poem, but these lines stick out for me:

"ten below zero
snow on ground,
bed of asphalt,
stench of death
lingering in alleyway

innocence
shattered
sold precious
soul
for survival

veil of tears
shrouds
bitter
agony"

great poem!

I cannot express how good it feels to read your kind comments about my poem

dreams echo within...

Kristi Echoes Family Member Friend of Echoes Posts: 677	GRACE OF STOLEN TIME Apr 6, 2010 6:28:23 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Kristi on Apr 6, 2010 6:28:23 GMT -5 unfortunately, there are so many youths in this predicament and you have managed to capture the sadness and tragedy of their lives perfectly, a most excellent write!
	looked within liked what I found

icee Echoes Family Member Veiled Emotions Friend of Echoes striving and reaching Posts: 661	GRACE OF STOLEN TIME Apr 6, 2010 6:38:47 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by icee on Apr 6, 2010 6:38:47 GMT -5 great tempo and flow, love it!!
	give of your soul

ken Echoes Senior Member Am I Awake? Friend of Echoes Walter Mosley (writer) Posts: 465	GRACE OF STOLEN TIME Apr 6, 2010 8:59:28 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by ken on Apr 6, 2010 8:59:28 GMT -5 excellent!

Eddie Echoes Family Member Friend of Echoes Am I here? Posts: 860	GRACE OF STOLEN TIME Apr 6, 2010 9:37:39 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Eddie on Apr 6, 2010 9:37:39 GMT -5 I love your poem, Lisa. You weave a story well, enjoyed this much!

Lisa Arnold Administrator Founder Belief is Power! Within a winter's shadow rests mourning's light"...the human soul cannot be permanently chained." - W.E.B. DuBois Believe in You! Posts: 16,456	GRACE OF STOLEN TIME Apr 6, 2010 9:48:39 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Lisa Arnold on Apr 6, 2010 9:48:39 GMT -5 thanks so much Kristi, icee, Ken and Eddie!
	dreams echo within...