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Post by Sara on Apr 6, 2010 11:06:02 GMT -5
wow, this is fantastic Lisa!
gripping and haunting topic, thanks for this one:)
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Post by Cyndi on Apr 6, 2010 11:22:42 GMT -5
good to see you posting again!
important theme and well-told...
this is fine writing and I hope there will be more posted by you soon!
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Post by Brian on Apr 6, 2010 11:41:32 GMT -5
deep write and vital subject, great write  these are my fav lines: ten below zero
snow on ground,
bed of asphalt,
stench of death
lingering in alleyway |
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Apr 6, 2010 11:53:04 GMT -5
wow, this is fantastic Lisa! gripping and haunting topic, thanks for this one:)  Sara  |
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Apr 6, 2010 11:54:26 GMT -5
good to see you posting again! important theme and well-told... this is fine writing and I hope there will be more posted by you soon! Cyndi, I deeply thank you  |
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Apr 6, 2010 11:55:25 GMT -5
deep write and vital subject, great write these are my fav lines: ten below zero
snow on ground,
bed of asphalt,
stench of death
lingering in alleyway dear Brian, it is always good to hear from you |
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Post by jbstillwater on Apr 6, 2010 14:52:09 GMT -5
Just beautiful, Lisa...and shows how you perfectly understand the art form and craft of writing poetry. As I read down each lilne, the painting evolved before my mind, sad and beautiful....
Wonderful writing, Lisa!
Jan
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Post by Toni on Apr 6, 2010 17:24:37 GMT -5
wow, this is a masterpiece!
I agree with Jan, this is a well-crated poem!
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Post by sunny on Apr 6, 2010 18:44:04 GMT -5
it is very touching Lisa! very well express and very good way of telling!
your words choice is very strong and powerful, yet still flow like poetry!
enjoy it!
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Apr 6, 2010 23:44:30 GMT -5
Just beautiful, Lisa...and shows how you perfectly understand the art form and craft of writing poetry. As I read down each lilne, the painting evolved before my mind, sad and beautiful.... Wonderful writing, Lisa! Jan Hello Jan Many thanks...you have made may day with your very kind comments about my poem and he craft of the poem  I deeply appreciate you takign the time to read and comment on my poem |
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Apr 6, 2010 23:45:20 GMT -5
wow, this is a masterpiece! I agree with Jan, this is a well-crated poem! Hey Helen, thanks so much |
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Apr 6, 2010 23:46:08 GMT -5
it is very touching Lisa! very well express and very good way of telling! your words choice is very strong and powerful, yet still flow like poetry! enjoy it! Hi sunny so much, much appreciate your kind comments |
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Post by Helen on Apr 6, 2010 23:56:20 GMT -5
a gripping, stirring and masterful write!
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Post by Lee on Apr 7, 2010 0:14:36 GMT -5
I don't remember  this one here before, Lisa. you have writen a wonderful poem and have illustrated your theme well..a masterpiece |
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Post by Kristi on Apr 7, 2010 1:39:45 GMT -5
thanks so much Kristi, icee, Ken and Eddie! Lisa, you are quite welcome I am back for a second read and your poem is even better the second time |
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Sara 
this one here before, Lisa.
all
time for me 
echoes, hope you all are doing well 
Hello everyone, sorry I have been away from the site so long but I was swamped with work 
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Hello everyone, sorry I have been away from the site so long but I was swamped with work 
Aug 5, 2021 14:19:11 GMT -5
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