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RISE
Apr 9, 2010 14:30:18 GMT -5
Post by mark on Apr 9, 2010 14:30:18 GMT -5
wow, this is so vivid! I can feel the raindrops and the wind, great job
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RISE
Apr 9, 2010 14:41:56 GMT -5
Post by rico on Apr 9, 2010 14:41:56 GMT -5
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RISE
Apr 9, 2010 15:00:07 GMT -5
Post by alan on Apr 9, 2010 15:00:07 GMT -5
Behind every dark cloud lies that silver lining. Enjoyed your poem, thank you.
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RISE
Apr 9, 2010 16:33:37 GMT -5
Post by b4sunset on Apr 9, 2010 16:33:37 GMT -5
Absolutely mind- blowing gift, lisa.. the layered images create one big impact on the theme of redemption.. wow!
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RISE
Apr 9, 2010 20:33:15 GMT -5
Post by Lee on Apr 9, 2010 20:33:15 GMT -5
an absolute gem, great poetry!
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RISE
Apr 9, 2010 21:06:09 GMT -5
Post by Helen on Apr 9, 2010 21:06:09 GMT -5
love the whole poem, just fabulous writing!
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RISE
Apr 9, 2010 21:27:13 GMT -5
Post by Toni on Apr 9, 2010 21:27:13 GMT -5
well-crafted, a most excellent write!
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RISE
Apr 9, 2010 23:16:23 GMT -5
Post by Rose on Apr 9, 2010 23:16:23 GMT -5
I find this poem to be one of the best I have ever read, simply beautiful wriitng!
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RISE
Apr 10, 2010 0:44:41 GMT -5
Post by Lisa Arnold on Apr 10, 2010 0:44:41 GMT -5
many thanks Mark and Rico!
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Apr 10, 2010 0:45:23 GMT -5
Post by Lisa Arnold on Apr 10, 2010 0:45:23 GMT -5
Behind every dark cloud lies that silver lining. Enjoyed your poem, thank you. Hello Alan, thank you for commenting
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Apr 10, 2010 0:46:31 GMT -5
Post by Lisa Arnold on Apr 10, 2010 0:46:31 GMT -5
Absolutely mind- blowing gift, lisa.. the layered images create one big impact on the theme of redemption.. wow! Hey b4! Thanks so much for your wonderful comment about my poem, you made my day
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RISE
Apr 10, 2010 0:47:17 GMT -5
Post by Lisa Arnold on Apr 10, 2010 0:47:17 GMT -5
many thanks Helen, Toni, your kind comments mena much to me
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Apr 10, 2010 0:48:28 GMT -5
Post by Lisa Arnold on Apr 10, 2010 0:48:28 GMT -5
I find this poem to be one of the best I have ever read, simply beautiful wriitng! so much Rose
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RISE
Apr 10, 2010 2:30:07 GMT -5
Post by Sierra on Apr 10, 2010 2:30:07 GMT -5
Lisa, I am sorry I missed this one.
I like the way you build yopur poem to it's conclusion, well-expressed!
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RISE
Apr 10, 2010 4:54:32 GMT -5
Post by Jay on Apr 10, 2010 4:54:32 GMT -5
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