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Post by Betty on Apr 14, 2010 8:06:13 GMT -5
this is a true story. I still wish I had of said "yes" 
spring rivers
stream
peonies blow
in silken winds
time elapses
in my heart
I often
wonder
what could
have been
if when you
asked
for my hand
I would
have said,
yes instead
of no?
©Betty
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Post by Charles on Apr 14, 2010 8:22:32 GMT -5
sad but concise little write. I have been on the other side of this, she told me no.
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Post by Betty on Apr 14, 2010 8:37:30 GMT -5
thanks blue!
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Post by Brian on Apr 14, 2010 12:38:29 GMT -5
pretty good write Betty!
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Post by Dana on Apr 14, 2010 13:01:05 GMT -5
sad write, but I enjoyed!
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Apr 14, 2010 22:32:09 GMT -5
well said, we will never know what might have been, will we?
good job, Betty!
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Post by ciara on Apr 15, 2010 3:38:20 GMT -5
solid brief write Betty, enjoyed this one!
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Post by Betty on Apr 15, 2010 20:52:49 GMT -5
thanks Ciara, I really appreciate the read and comment!
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Post by icee on Apr 15, 2010 21:46:49 GMT -5
oh regrets sometime burn deep, good job with this one Betty!
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Post by rico on Apr 16, 2010 6:49:48 GMT -5
nice soild little gem of a poem Betty!
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Post by Betty on Apr 17, 2010 4:02:47 GMT -5
many thanks Donna and rico!
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Post by b4sunset on Apr 18, 2010 17:24:02 GMT -5
A beautiful ouchie; great gift that reflects man's inner pulses...  |
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Post by Betty on Apr 20, 2010 23:47:33 GMT -5
thanks b4!
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and 
all
time for me 
echoes, hope you all are doing well 
