HAVE YOU SEEN MY CHILD? (TOAST OF THE WEEK) 8-28

[Lola]

with everyone else. This is wonderful writing and very poignant

[Lisa Arnold]

many thanks Cherrie, Sierra and Dana!

[Lisa Arnold]

thanks Lola!

[ciara]

this is an instant favorite of mine

It is simple yet alluring as well as being riveting and heart-tugging...Love it

I wish you much luck with publication

have a great day

[Lisa Arnold]

thanks Ciara...I really appreciate your comments and the read

just to let you guys know, I will be off of the site until probably late tonight, so you all have a great day

you guys are the best and much love to you

we need a group hug emoticon

[b4sunset]

The pathos of this wrenching gift is a mark that it will be published, lisa... i enter into the pain of losing a child; how powerful!

[heart2heart]

I'm sure it's your choice to post over here Lisa, but I think this one deserves to be more in the limelight. If I could, I would vote for this as the POTD. Let's say I have been somewhat involved in matters such as these and understand the anguish and total horror. A pleasure to read one of your longer poems.
Katriona

[Eddie]

Yes, I agree with Katriona, this should be on the main poetry page, Lisa.

I absolutely love this, very well crafted...it's an original

Thanks for sharing the inspiration for this and I hope it gets published

shine on my sister of the pen

[Jack]

I agree with everyone this is an excellent and unique write that casuses one's emotions to ignite...I sure hope it gets published!

[Lisa Arnold]

Apr 19, 2010 13:15:06 GMT -5 b4sunset said:

The pathos of this wrenching gift is a mark that it will be published, lisa... i enter into the pain of losing a child; how powerful!

thanks for your kind comments Nenette

I wasn't aware of that you lost a child, I am deeply sorry for your loss

[Lisa Arnold]

Apr 19, 2010 14:39:43 GMT -5 heart2heart said:

I'm sure it's your choice to post over here Lisa, but I think this one deserves to be more in the limelight. If I could, I would vote for this as the POTD. Let's say I have been somewhat involved in matters such as these and understand the anguish and total horror. A pleasure to read one of your longer poems.
Katriona

Katriona, I really appreciate you commenting on my poem. It is so kind of you to say my poem should be POTD, thanks for saying so. I am so glad you stopped by and I hope you will again

I may post again in POETRY section

I am sorry you have been touched by similar tragedies as the ones described in my poem, take care

[Lisa Arnold]

Apr 20, 2010 0:11:24 GMT -5 Eddie said:

Yes, I agree with Katriona, this should be on the main poetry page, Lisa.

I absolutely love this, very well crafted...it's an original

Thanks for sharing the inspiration for this and I hope it gets published

shine on my sister of the pen

so much Eddie, nice to see you here and thanks for the read

[Sharon]

Lisa, your poetry and talent of grace never ceases to amaze or surprise me

this is a very unique and extremely well-written poem

hope you have a blessed day dear Lisa

[Kristi]

touching write, very well-done my dear Lisa!

you have a blessed day as well, love ya!

[Lisa Arnold]

thanks so much Sharon and Kristi!!