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Betty Haiku/Short Form Monitor[/size] Posts: 1,477	Broken Man Apr 20, 2010 23:49:52 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Betty on Apr 20, 2010 23:49:52 GMT -5 BROKEN MAN torn broken man stumbles through life searching for a soul he never possessed in the wake of next morning his soul is revived ©Betty **This is my first attempt at a minimalist poem… [/color]

Rose Echoes Family Member Posts: 562	Broken Man Apr 21, 2010 0:18:29 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Rose on Apr 21, 2010 0:18:29 GMT -5 great job Betty I like your style, your writes are always sleek, but meaningful and captivating

Betty Haiku/Short Form Monitor[/size] Posts: 1,477	Broken Man Apr 21, 2010 0:30:22 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Betty on Apr 21, 2010 0:30:22 GMT -5 thanks dear Rose! you are so sweet, much love to ya!

Lisa Arnold Administrator Founder Belief is Power! Within a winter's shadow rests mourning's light"...the human soul cannot be permanently chained." - W.E.B. DuBois Believe in You! Posts: 16,456	Broken Man Apr 21, 2010 0:39:20 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Lisa Arnold on Apr 21, 2010 0:39:20 GMT -5 Betty, I ove this, great ending! thanks so much for the post!
	dreams echo within...

Betty Haiku/Short Form Monitor[/size] Posts: 1,477	Broken Man Apr 21, 2010 0:54:16 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Betty on Apr 21, 2010 0:54:16 GMT -5 thanks Lisa!

Cherrie Echoes Family Member Friend of Echoes Loving This Beautiful Life Posts: 1,002	Broken Man Apr 21, 2010 1:04:48 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Cherrie on Apr 21, 2010 1:04:48 GMT -5 excellent, great depth and I love how it ends!
	"Trying to step out of my own way"

Charles Echoes Family Member Friend of Echoes It's me "blue" Posts: 605	Broken Man Apr 21, 2010 1:46:39 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Charles on Apr 21, 2010 1:46:39 GMT -5 I am liking this Betty!

rico Echoes Family Member Friend of Echoes Posts: 542	Broken Man Apr 21, 2010 6:41:33 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by rico on Apr 21, 2010 6:41:33 GMT -5 a fine example in my opnion, nice job!

Eddie Echoes Family Member Friend of Echoes Am I here? Posts: 860	Broken Man Apr 21, 2010 7:00:38 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Eddie on Apr 21, 2010 7:00:38 GMT -5 enjoyed the read, nice ending!

Betty Haiku/Short Form Monitor[/size] Posts: 1,477	Broken Man Apr 21, 2010 7:17:04 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Betty on Apr 21, 2010 7:17:04 GMT -5 many thanks Cherrie, blue, rico and eddie!! I much appreciate the reads and nice comments!

Alicia Echoes Family Member Friend of Echoes Living Life! Posts: 883	Broken Man Apr 21, 2010 8:01:07 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Alicia on Apr 21, 2010 8:01:07 GMT -5 very good write, Betty! we all stumble through life from time to time life, and it is wonderful when we finally find our way!

bridge Echoes Family Member Friend of Echoes Posts: 883	Broken Man Apr 21, 2010 8:22:51 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by bridge on Apr 21, 2010 8:22:51 GMT -5 well-composed Betty!

Reggie Writing Prompt Moderator[/size] Friend of Echoes Posts: 1,400	Broken Man Apr 21, 2010 12:00:43 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Reggie on Apr 21, 2010 12:00:43 GMT -5 enjoyed, thanks!

Sara Echoes Family Member Billy is my Prince! Friend of Echoes Posts: 830	Broken Man Apr 21, 2010 12:29:18 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Sara on Apr 21, 2010 12:29:18 GMT -5 very nice poem!

Kristi Echoes Family Member Friend of Echoes Posts: 677	Broken Man Apr 21, 2010 22:14:31 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Kristi on Apr 21, 2010 22:14:31 GMT -5 this is great Betty, I really like it!
	looked within liked what I found

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