SHADOW OF HEAVEN'S NEST

Lee Echoes Family Member Lost and Found Friend of Echoes Posts: 580	SHADOW OF HEAVEN'S NEST Jun 6, 2005 7:32:06 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Lee on Jun 6, 2005 7:32:06 GMT -5 I agree with the rest, this is a fantastic write! I love the flow and the title is very alluring. You did a great job, Lisa! Thanks for sharing:) Hope to talk with you soon:)
	seeking to believe

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SHADOW OF HEAVEN'S NEST Jun 6, 2005 10:24:05 GMT -5

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Post by egyptgirl on Jun 6, 2005 10:24:05 GMT -5

Dearest Lisa,

I cry at such depth of need and rejoice with your newfound deliverance. You express the condition of your soul so ardently with your written thoughts.

How true of all of us do these words portray:

Stripped from my soul,
I struggle to carry on in vain
as I search for a portion of my life to reclaim.

I cower in the protection of darkness
and cling to fading fragile desire,
only to become more entangled inside my life's mire.

We must all find forgiveness and rest in what way we travel in whatever way we believe.

Thanks for sharing your journey so superbly,

Kim

Treasure of Tutankhamen
I am the one it is
Take me with you
Through the Stargate
To the Valley of the Kings

Lisa Arnold Administrator Founder Belief is Power! Within a winter's shadow rests mourning's light"...the human soul cannot be permanently chained." - W.E.B. DuBois Believe in You! Posts: 16,456	SHADOW OF HEAVEN'S NEST Jun 6, 2005 17:24:57 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Lisa Arnold on Jun 6, 2005 17:24:57 GMT -5 Thanks Lee and Misty, I deeply appreciate your kindness:) Thanks so much for the lovely thoughts Kim:)
	dreams echo within...

Dana Echoes Family Member Friend of Echoes beginning again Posts: 983	SHADOW OF HEAVEN'S NEST Jun 6, 2005 20:11:47 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Dana on Jun 6, 2005 20:11:47 GMT -5 Let me chime in too Lisa, this is so wonderfully expressed and it flows with such gentleness, fantastic job! The title is perfect and the abb rhyme scheme works well, nice work!

bloodwine Guest	SHADOW OF HEAVEN'S NEST Jun 6, 2005 22:58:10 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Back to Top Post by bloodwine on Jun 6, 2005 22:58:10 GMT -5 What can I say that hasn't been said already?

Eddie Echoes Family Member Friend of Echoes Am I here? Posts: 860	SHADOW OF HEAVEN'S NEST Jun 7, 2005 0:26:56 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Eddie on Jun 7, 2005 0:26:56 GMT -5 I agree with everyone else, this is absolutely beautiful writing, good to see you posting your wonderful poetry again!

sweetpest Guest	SHADOW OF HEAVEN'S NEST Jun 7, 2005 1:14:37 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Back to Top Post by sweetpest on Jun 7, 2005 1:14:37 GMT -5 This is a totally superb write. Excellence!!

Jay Echoes Family Member Friend of Echoes striving to believe Posts: 622	SHADOW OF HEAVEN'S NEST Jun 7, 2005 5:10:27 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Jay on Jun 7, 2005 5:10:27 GMT -5 I want to chime in as well, EXCELLENTLY DONE!! Your talent amazes me:)

Tina Lounge Moderator[/size] Finding Inner Peace Chasing Echoes Posts: 1,142	SHADOW OF HEAVEN'S NEST Jun 7, 2005 13:49:40 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Tina on Jun 7, 2005 13:49:40 GMT -5 wow, love this poem! It flows with such ease and is packed with great emotion, lovely work as always, Lisa!
	"I'll never long for what might have been..." - Mark Tremonti

Lisa Arnold Administrator Founder Belief is Power! Within a winter's shadow rests mourning's light"...the human soul cannot be permanently chained." - W.E.B. DuBois Believe in You! Posts: 16,456	SHADOW OF HEAVEN'S NEST Jun 7, 2005 17:27:38 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Lisa Arnold on Jun 7, 2005 17:27:38 GMT -5 Thanks so much Dana, bloodwine, Eddie, Sweetpest, Jay and Tina, I treasure all of your kindness!
	dreams echo within...

mark Echoes Senior Member Friend of Echoes Posts: 416	SHADOW OF HEAVEN'S NEST Jun 8, 2005 5:37:58 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by mark on Jun 8, 2005 5:37:58 GMT -5 excellent write, Lisa, I adore your work and talent! Thanks for inviting me here, I will emaill you soon, take care, Mark
	my past is my business!

Lisa Arnold Administrator Founder Belief is Power! Within a winter's shadow rests mourning's light"...the human soul cannot be permanently chained." - W.E.B. DuBois Believe in You! Posts: 16,456	SHADOW OF HEAVEN'S NEST Jun 8, 2005 16:28:08 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Lisa Arnold on Jun 8, 2005 16:28:08 GMT -5 Hey Mark! Thanks for the nice comments, glad to see you here, I got your email, I wrote ya back! Talk soon:)
	dreams echo within...

mark Echoes Senior Member Friend of Echoes Posts: 416	SHADOW OF HEAVEN'S NEST Jun 8, 2005 18:06:55 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by mark on Jun 8, 2005 18:06:55 GMT -5 Hey Lisa, you got email:)
	my past is my business!

nspiration Guest	SHADOW OF HEAVEN'S NEST Jun 8, 2005 18:57:21 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Back to Top Post by nspiration on Jun 8, 2005 18:57:21 GMT -5 This was so peaceful. As I read, I could visualize every action. Marvelous piece.

sweetpest Guest	SHADOW OF HEAVEN'S NEST Jun 8, 2005 22:24:19 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Back to Top Post by sweetpest on Jun 8, 2005 22:24:19 GMT -5 Beautiful and touching write!!