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SHADOW OF HEAVEN'S NEST

Lisa Arnold Administrator Founder Belief is Power! Within a winter's shadow rests mourning's light"...the human soul cannot be permanently chained." - W.E.B. DuBois Believe in You! Posts: 16,456	SHADOW OF HEAVEN'S NEST Jun 9, 2005 6:25:34 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Lisa Arnold on Jun 9, 2005 6:25:34 GMT -5 thanks so much nspiration and Sweetpest!
	dreams echo within...

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SHADOW OF HEAVEN'S NEST Jun 9, 2005 16:20:37 GMT -5

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Post by sirenkaybee on Jun 9, 2005 16:20:37 GMT -5

Good work, but lacking some imagry in the 5th stanza I think. As I think that the words "fate" and "faith should be revised for something alittle more suitable. As this is the only stanza that doesn't really rhyme. Still great piece. Nicely done.

ciara Echoes Family Member Motivated by Passion Friend of Echoes Posts: 821	SHADOW OF HEAVEN'S NEST Jun 9, 2005 18:11:22 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by ciara on Jun 9, 2005 18:11:22 GMT -5 I had to come back again, love this poem throughout, excellent:) Lisa I emailed you:)
	waiting for life to begin

Lisa Arnold Administrator Founder Belief is Power! Within a winter's shadow rests mourning's light"...the human soul cannot be permanently chained." - W.E.B. DuBois Believe in You! Posts: 16,456	SHADOW OF HEAVEN'S NEST Jun 9, 2005 19:26:04 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Lisa Arnold on Jun 9, 2005 19:26:04 GMT -5 thanks siren, I will keep "fate" and "faith" because for me it is the underlying theme of the poem. back again, ciara, thanks for the comments:)
	dreams echo within...

dwlackey Echoes Senior Member Posts: 312	SHADOW OF HEAVEN'S NEST Jun 10, 2005 21:41:23 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by dwlackey on Jun 10, 2005 21:41:23 GMT -5 This was powerful and uplifting. A great poem with an even greater message. Also great title.

Lisa Arnold Administrator Founder Belief is Power! Within a winter's shadow rests mourning's light"...the human soul cannot be permanently chained." - W.E.B. DuBois Believe in You! Posts: 16,456	SHADOW OF HEAVEN'S NEST Jun 11, 2005 2:48:47 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Lisa Arnold on Jun 11, 2005 2:48:47 GMT -5 Hi Dwayne, thank you so much! Glad you liked it. You are the first to comemnt on the message:)
	dreams echo within...

percy Echoes Family Member Wading Deep Waters Friend of Echoes Posts: 787	SHADOW OF HEAVEN'S NEST Jun 12, 2005 6:40:18 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by percy on Jun 12, 2005 6:40:18 GMT -5 Hi Lisa, I cannot believe I missed this one, your brilliance shines brightly with this write! Absolutely excellent! Thanks for sharing a part of your soul with us:)

Lisa Arnold Administrator Founder Belief is Power! Within a winter's shadow rests mourning's light"...the human soul cannot be permanently chained." - W.E.B. DuBois Believe in You! Posts: 16,456	SHADOW OF HEAVEN'S NEST Jun 13, 2005 4:50:28 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Lisa Arnold on Jun 13, 2005 4:50:28 GMT -5 Thank you so much Percy, I appreciate your sweet and kind words:)
	dreams echo within...

Eddie Echoes Family Member Friend of Echoes Am I here? Posts: 860	SHADOW OF HEAVEN'S NEST Jun 13, 2005 17:16:01 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Eddie on Jun 13, 2005 17:16:01 GMT -5 read it again, Lisa. I have an idea I would like to discuss, I will email you about it:)

Lisa Arnold Administrator Founder Belief is Power! Within a winter's shadow rests mourning's light"...the human soul cannot be permanently chained." - W.E.B. DuBois Believe in You! Posts: 16,456	SHADOW OF HEAVEN'S NEST Jun 14, 2005 6:56:44 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Lisa Arnold on Jun 14, 2005 6:56:44 GMT -5 got your email, and I am very interested, let me know when you want to get started:)
	dreams echo within...

aquarianstar Echoes Family Member Deluded Dreams In order to form an immaculate member of a flock of sheep one must, above all, be a sheep. Posts: 1,037	SHADOW OF HEAVEN'S NEST Jun 14, 2005 9:29:40 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by aquarianstar on Jun 14, 2005 9:29:40 GMT -5 Wow! truly amazing work! I am, as always, in awe of your talent Lisa. What an incredible creation, EXCELLENT flow, and perfect tempo and rhythm. You just keep up all that fantastic work girl!!! Sarah*
	'Our deepest fear is not that we are inadequate. Our deepest fear is that we are powerful, beyond measure. It is our light, not our darkness that frightens us.'

Lisa Arnold Administrator Founder Belief is Power! Within a winter's shadow rests mourning's light"...the human soul cannot be permanently chained." - W.E.B. DuBois Believe in You! Posts: 16,456	SHADOW OF HEAVEN'S NEST Jun 15, 2005 15:03:27 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Lisa Arnold on Jun 15, 2005 15:03:27 GMT -5 Sarah Your kinds words mean alot to me ;D
	dreams echo within...

Helen Echoes Family Member Friend of Echoes Bright and Polite Posts: 565	SHADOW OF HEAVEN'S NEST Jun 17, 2005 15:34:50 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Helen on Jun 17, 2005 15:34:50 GMT -5 Hey Lisa, this is fantastic writing, I haven't been around in awhile. You are a wonderful poet! Keep up the great work!
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Daboetry Echoes Family Member Posts: 1,129	SHADOW OF HEAVEN'S NEST Jun 17, 2005 21:54:41 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Daboetry on Jun 17, 2005 21:54:41 GMT -5 WOW, THAT WAS TRULY INCREDIBLE LISA...Gurl you gave me goosebumps...what a powerful write..and it is a sweet title....Great job
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percy Echoes Family Member Wading Deep Waters Friend of Echoes Posts: 787	SHADOW OF HEAVEN'S NEST Jun 19, 2005 1:58:37 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by percy on Jun 19, 2005 1:58:37 GMT -5 Thank you so much Percy, I appreciate your sweet and kind words:) you are most welcome, Lisa