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Post by Lisa Arnold on Jul 11, 2005 3:31:19 GMT -5
early
mid-summer
morning
bronze-orange
sky
shining brightly
inside succulent
winds lingers
the scent
of lavender
eastern breezes
roll off the sea
gently spraying
nature's mist
upon vacant soul
walking alone
on white-sand
beach
gracious memories
of love's lost embrace
has been awakened
©2005 Lisa Arnold
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Post by icee on Jul 11, 2005 4:04:20 GMT -5
great imagery and flow, nice write, Lisa!
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Jul 11, 2005 4:10:04 GMT -5
 so much, icee 
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Post by Brian on Jul 11, 2005 4:21:47 GMT -5
Love the title  well versed and nice imagery  I have often been awakened by walks on the beach  |
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Post by mark on Jul 11, 2005 4:36:23 GMT -5
well done, Lisa
very visually penned!
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Post by Dana on Jul 11, 2005 6:01:25 GMT -5
Lisa, this one flows with such gentleness, well penned |
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Jul 11, 2005 6:05:17 GMT -5
Brian yes, walks along the beach can awaken one's soul 
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Jul 11, 2005 6:06:07 GMT -5
Hey Mark,
thanks for your kind words:)
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Jul 11, 2005 6:06:56 GMT -5
Dana, I appreciate your comment:) thanks for the read:)
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Post by rrw on Jul 11, 2005 7:13:33 GMT -5
Very nice. I love your style. Nice, specific word choices. Flows like a river.
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Post by janicemarie on Jul 11, 2005 9:32:40 GMT -5
How lovely Lisa! I can imagine this walk and the scent of lavendar is my favorite. Great flow and write.
janice marie
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Post by Cherrie on Jul 11, 2005 16:48:20 GMT -5
I agree with the others, this flows with great ease and caresses the soul!
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Post by Lee on Jul 11, 2005 17:20:16 GMT -5
this one speaks to me:) well done, Lisa!
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Post by Daboetry on Jul 11, 2005 17:34:29 GMT -5
That was just Beautiful gurl....Wow
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Post by Toni on Jul 11, 2005 18:06:44 GMT -5
Lisa, I loved this flows well and is so beautifully expressed, nice job just a little suggestion for the last stanza>  |
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time for me 
echoes, hope you all are doing well 
