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Post by Lisa Arnold on May 1, 2010 2:53:14 GMT -5
 FRAGMENTS (a nonet)
fragments of starlight in midnight sky
moonlight-glint caresses the sea
his eyes display apathy
hers covets gentle hope
side by side they walk
thinking of days
when their love
had not
crashed
©2006 Lisa Arnold |
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Post by Charles on May 1, 2010 3:13:25 GMT -5
good job as always Lisa!
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Post by Silent-One on May 1, 2010 3:30:18 GMT -5
excellent Lisa  great image choice as well, thanks for sharing...have a great weekend   |
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Post by Cherrie on May 1, 2010 3:38:49 GMT -5
It is so sad when relationships get to this point  I still believe there is hope for the “couple” in your poem  a fine and precise nonet, Lisa have a wonderful weekend |
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Post by rico on May 1, 2010 4:08:39 GMT -5
I like it Lisa...I enjoy your nonet poems!
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Post by Alicia on May 1, 2010 4:33:10 GMT -5
Lisa, this is fantastic and very descriptive you sure know how to write a nonet  love the first two lines:
"fragments of starlight in midnight sky
moonlight-glint caresses the sea"
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Post by Lisa Arnold on May 1, 2010 4:49:59 GMT -5
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Post by Lisa Arnold on May 1, 2010 4:50:58 GMT -5
excellent Lisa great image choice as well, thanks for sharing...have a great weekend  Harry, so nice of you to stop by and comment |
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Post by Lisa Arnold on May 1, 2010 4:52:33 GMT -5
It is so sad when relationships get to this point I still believe there is hope for the “couple” in your poem a fine and precise nonet, Lisa have a wonderful weekend yes ,I feel the couple has hope of making it thanks for commenting, Cherrie |
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Post by Lisa Arnold on May 1, 2010 4:53:18 GMT -5
I like it Lisa...I enjoy your nonet poems! thanks so much Rico, glad you enjoy them |
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Post by Lisa Arnold on May 1, 2010 4:54:19 GMT -5
Lisa, this is fantastic and very descriptive you sure know how to write a nonet love the first two lines:
"fragments of starlight in midnight sky
moonlight-glint caresses the sea"
thanks so much Alicia, your kind words mean much to me |
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Post by Betty on May 1, 2010 5:38:10 GMT -5
vivid and concise nonet, just perfect!
I am a fan of your nonet poetry dear Lisa!
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Post by Brian on May 1, 2010 5:49:18 GMT -5
I remember this poem being at one of your other sites, great to read it here!
well-done, good image choice!
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Post by Lola on May 1, 2010 5:58:02 GMT -5
Lisa, I cannot tell you how many times I have been here in my current relationship!
But we are working it out, thank God!
good write and read, thanks for posting!
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Post by Jay on May 1, 2010 6:29:34 GMT -5
great job on this nonet and like always!
hey there is my "wifey" up there...lol Lola I am just kidding about our Obama avatars....
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blue 
and 
all
time for me 
echoes, hope you all are doing well 
