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Post by Lisa Arnold on May 3, 2010 7:06:35 GMT -5
Hello guys! “Warrior Heart” was also published in Event’s Quarterly. It is one of my darker poems. Hope you all like it  [/color][/b]
WARRIOR HEART
Fallen angel lets go
of rusted chain which binds her.
Shivering body lays quiet
in the vestibule.
Hushed prayer is whispered
over dying soul.
Listless eyes shelter
forbidden secrets.
Life-long torment is buried
behind twisted mouth.
Bloodied hands, scarred
from clawing, lay lifeless.
Worn eyes, gracefully,
bow shut.
Smoldering anger,
gently, comes to rest.
Warrior heart, beats faintly
as the struggle comes to an end.
Before impending death,
one last breath escapes.
©2008 Lisa Arnold
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Post by Reggie on May 3, 2010 7:19:04 GMT -5
very sad write. I am not used to  sad poems from you, but it is well-written. It is a shame that some people leave this earth without enjoying life or experiencing peace, good job  gotta run Lisa, it's time for work  have a great day sunshine  |
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Post by Sierra on May 3, 2010 7:23:24 GMT -5
great write Lisa I really like the opening line: "Fallen angel lets go of rusted chain which binds her." good imagery in this piece, solid write |
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Post by Betty on May 3, 2010 7:48:00 GMT -5
it is so sad when a "warrior"gives up on life  a sad write, but I truly love it! Great depth and meanining, thanks for posting dear Lisa hope you have a peaceful day |
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Post by Silent-One on May 3, 2010 8:06:06 GMT -5
:-[wow, this is fantastic, sad yes, but very well-scribed I would like to ask, is the woman in this poem a victim of another or of herself? Did she commit suicide or did she die from an act of violence? Just my curious nature... intriguing write...have a great day everyone |
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Post by ciara on May 3, 2010 8:13:23 GMT -5
stunning and captivating poem!
I understand why it was published!
keep up the great work and have a nice day!
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Post by Alicia on May 3, 2010 8:20:43 GMT -5
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Post by rico on May 3, 2010 8:33:14 GMT -5
captivates the reader for sure!
fine write dear one!
Lisa, I am sorry for the quick response, but I am running a little late this morning...
have a great day everyone!
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Post by Lisa Arnold on May 3, 2010 8:55:50 GMT -5
very sad write. I am not used to sad poems from you, but it is well-written. It is a shame that some people leave this earth without enjoying life or experiencing peace, good job gotta run Lisa, it's time for work have a great day sunshine thanks for stopping by and commenting |
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Post by Lisa Arnold on May 3, 2010 8:56:53 GMT -5
great write Lisa I really like the opening line: "Fallen angel lets go of rusted chain which binds her." good imagery in this piece, solid write  Sierra, I deeply appreciate your input |
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Post by Lisa Arnold on May 3, 2010 8:57:51 GMT -5
it is so sad when a "warrior"gives up on life a sad write, but I truly love it! Great depth and meanining, thanks for posting dear Lisa hope you have a peaceful day thanks Betty, its always nice hearing from you my dear friend |
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Post by Lisa Arnold on May 3, 2010 9:14:43 GMT -5
:-[wow, this is fantastic, sad yes, but very well-scribed I would like to ask, is the woman in this poem a victim of another or of herself? Did she commit suicide or did she die from an act of violence? Just my curious nature... intriguing write...have a great day everyone thanks Harry As for the woman in the poem, I believe that a it is up to the reader's interpretation. So whatever you believe happened is what happened to her. To me half of the enjoyment of writing and is the interpretation of the writer's words and meaning by the reader  Thanks for your question and thanks for stopping by |
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Post by Lisa Arnold on May 3, 2010 9:15:37 GMT -5
stunning and captivating poem! I understand why it was published! keep up the great work and have a nice day! Ciara |
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Post by Lisa Arnold on May 3, 2010 9:17:14 GMT -5
I cherish your poetry and this one gets to me every time I read it, wonderful writing here, Lisa  with Ciara about no wonder why it was published have a blessed day all many thanks Alicia |
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Post by Lisa Arnold on May 3, 2010 9:18:08 GMT -5
captivates the reader for sure! fine write dear one! Lisa, I am sorry for the quick response, but I am running a little late this morning... have a great day everyone! Rico |
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sad poems from you, but it is well-written. 
with Ciara about no wonder why it was published 
Sierra, I deeply appreciate your input 
and 
all
time for me 
echoes, hope you all are doing well 
