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Post by Billy on May 4, 2010 9:58:51 GMT -5
a fine write, grips the soul and hold the reader's attention  I truly enjoyed the read  have a great day all   |
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Post by Lisa Arnold on May 4, 2010 10:50:58 GMT -5
I was entralled, Lisa I like the detail in first two stanzas: "Heavy enclosing darkness, surrounds me in this cramped lifeless room. Windows, locked, shuttered and shaded. Curtains, drawn and thick." well done, my friend  have a wonderful day all, I am off to work  Sierra, glad you enjoyed and it was great hearing from ya |
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Post by Lisa Arnold on May 4, 2010 10:52:08 GMT -5
very descriptive write, love every word! many thanks Alicia |
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Post by Lisa Arnold on May 4, 2010 10:53:55 GMT -5
great write isolation and loneliness can be devastating to the soul... love this passage: "Isolated by inner fear, I reach for the hand of another which which is not there." thanks Rico, loved hearing from you |
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Post by Lisa Arnold on May 4, 2010 10:55:17 GMT -5
oh, I love this write, great job  Lisa, this line is great: "I am entombed in the still of this vacuous room." have a wonderful day my Echoes friends Sara, I really appreciate the read |
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Post by Lisa Arnold on May 4, 2010 10:56:40 GMT -5
I am iin awe of this fantastic write! keep them coming dear Lisa! I am off to work too...have a great day people! thanks dear Jay, always a pleasure to hear from you |
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Post by Lisa Arnold on May 4, 2010 10:58:14 GMT -5
wonderfully writen Lisa, love the entire poem! Kristi, you comments mean much to me, thanks for stopping by
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Post by Lisa Arnold on May 4, 2010 10:59:04 GMT -5
a fine write, grips the soul and hold the reader's attention I truly enjoyed the read have a great day all thanks so much for you input dear Billy |
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Post by Eddie on May 4, 2010 11:08:01 GMT -5
great flow, tempo and imagery, love it!!
gotta get back to work, took a quick break
hope everyone has a great day!
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Post by Helen on May 4, 2010 11:15:29 GMT -5
absolutely one of my fav's by you dear one thanks for the update PM, that is great to hear  a day of shopping and errands for me  have a great day Echoes |
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Post by Dana on May 4, 2010 11:32:09 GMT -5
a stunner Lisa!
enjoyed the ride and the read...thanks!
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Post by Cherrie on May 4, 2010 11:38:05 GMT -5
I can relate somewhat to the emotions in this piece, truly a great poem have a great day my echoes friends |
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Post by Lisa Arnold on May 4, 2010 13:50:26 GMT -5
thanks bunches Eddie, Helen, Dana and Cherrie!
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Post by bridge on May 4, 2010 22:18:45 GMT -5
excellent write, my lady...enjoyed immensely!
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Post by Lisa Arnold on May 4, 2010 23:36:21 GMT -5
thanks so much Dan!
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Sierra, glad you enjoyed and it was great hearing from ya 
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echoes, hope you all are doing well 
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