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Post by Lisa Arnold on May 6, 2010 1:35:21 GMT -5
 Hello Echoes, this is a slightly different version of “Champagne Toast.” Some of you may have read it on one of my other sites. I made changes to three lines…let me know what you think [/i][/color] 
CHAMPAGNE TOAST – a nonet
burnt-orange sunset peacefully falls
tranquil waters flow towards beach
sparkling wine poured in glasses
champagne-toast kiss to love
masculine hands stroke
her longing skin
tepid winds
gently
blow
©2007 Lisa Arnold
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Post by Betty on May 6, 2010 2:01:11 GMT -5
 stunningly beautiful Lisa  I love the picture...excellent nonet poetry as always from you dear Lisa  hope you have a beautiful day and thank you for this gorgeous poem 
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Post by percy on May 6, 2010 2:33:16 GMT -5
elegantly scribed, and a perfect nonet!
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Post by Bob on May 6, 2010 2:43:58 GMT -5
The changes work for me Lisa!
It has always been a fav of mine from you, just beautiful writing here and a perfect picture!
thanks for the post and have a great day everyone!
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Post by Rose on May 6, 2010 2:58:09 GMT -5
wonderful nonet poem!
Lisa you write these like no other!
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Post by Kristi on May 6, 2010 3:31:46 GMT -5
wonderful job...what a nice treat to start out my day!
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Post by Eddie on May 6, 2010 3:32:11 GMT -5
a real gem Lisa, great picture I forgot to say, have a great day Echoes people  |
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Post by Jay on May 6, 2010 4:02:59 GMT -5
perfection, just beautiful my dear!
have a blessed and safe day everybody!
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Post by Alicia on May 6, 2010 6:16:05 GMT -5
Lisa this is a beautiful presentation and a fantastic nonet!
have a great day my echoes people!
off to work I go...............
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Post by Lisa Arnold on May 6, 2010 6:32:19 GMT -5
stunningly beautiful Lisa I love the picture...excellent nonet poetry as always from you dear Lisa hope you have a beautiful day and thank you for this gorgeous poem thanks so much Betty you are so sweet and kind |
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Post by Lisa Arnold on May 6, 2010 6:32:54 GMT -5
elegantly scribed, and a perfect nonet!  Percy |
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Post by Lisa Arnold on May 6, 2010 6:33:59 GMT -5
The changes work for me Lisa! It has always been a fav of mine from you, just beautiful writing here and a perfect picture! thanks for the post and have a great day everyone! thanks so much Bob, I deeply apprceaite you input |
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Post by Lisa Arnold on May 6, 2010 6:34:42 GMT -5
wonderful nonet poem! Lisa you write these like no other! Rose, you are so kind, love you |
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Post by Lisa Arnold on May 6, 2010 6:35:56 GMT -5
wonderful job...what a nice treat to start out my day! Kristi, I'm so glad you gave me a read and commented on my poem |
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Post by Lisa Arnold on May 6, 2010 6:36:44 GMT -5
a real gem Lisa, great picture I forgot to say, have a great day Echoes people dear Eddie |
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Hello Echoes, this is a slightly different version of “Champagne Toast.” Some of you may have read it on one of my other sites. I made changes to three lines…let me know what you think 
Percy 
and 
all
time for me 
echoes, hope you all are doing well 
