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Post by Lisa Arnold on Apr 29, 2005 20:03:51 GMT -5
so much brokenpen and pixie for the nice comments
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Post by countrygalcc on Apr 29, 2005 22:00:13 GMT -5
A Wonderful poem. Out of all of your poems I have read this one I love the most. You really should send this one to poetry.com to a contest. I think you would have a good chance to win big cash. If I had a lot of cash you would win my poetry contest. I really love this!
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Apr 30, 2005 0:11:30 GMT -5
thanks Misty I really appreciate your kind words I think I will send this one to poetry.com thanks for the advice
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Post by Jay on May 12, 2010 9:22:49 GMT -5
Hi Lisa I remmber this one, excellent write thanks for letting us read it again welcome back my friend enjoy your day ;D
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Post by Joan on May 12, 2010 9:31:31 GMT -5
another great poem Lisa I love the ending section: "I am buried alive by my desires. Not until I reach my grave, will I ever stop longing for all I crave."good to see you back
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Post by Lisa Arnold on May 12, 2010 9:36:59 GMT -5
many thanks Jay and Joan!
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Post by rico on May 12, 2010 10:14:46 GMT -5
great write, thanks for sharing!
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Post by Eddie on May 12, 2010 10:19:56 GMT -5
love this poem, great job
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Post by Reggie on May 12, 2010 10:26:14 GMT -5
Love the title Lisa, great write This is my favorite part: "I am alive with rage. It pulsates, divinely, through my icy veins."
have a great day
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Post by Brian on May 12, 2010 10:29:55 GMT -5
;D good emotion and tone, very well-written dear Lisa
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Post by Carin on May 12, 2010 10:47:38 GMT -5
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Post by Lisa Arnold on May 12, 2010 14:45:32 GMT -5
thanks Rico, Eddie, Riggeie, Brian and Carin!
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Post by Dana on May 12, 2010 14:56:33 GMT -5
excellent Lisa!
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Post by Sharon on May 13, 2010 2:50:07 GMT -5
wonderfully written Lisa...enjoyed the read!
thanks so much for letting us read this one again!
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Post by Lee on May 13, 2010 3:03:13 GMT -5
;D this is my kind of write Lisa because it shows inner strength, will and determination...great job thanks for the post
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