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Post by Lee on Jun 3, 2008 7:00:57 GMT -5
fantastic write Lisa, I am so happy to see you posting again, you possess a special talent dear lady... talk soon...
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Post by Alicia on Jun 3, 2008 7:03:48 GMT -5
brilliantly told, good to see you posting again
have a nice day and week....
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Post by Brian on Jun 3, 2008 7:12:04 GMT -5
very emotive, I enjoyed this much!
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Post by Billy on Jun 3, 2008 7:21:59 GMT -5
a fine write as always, a true pleasure to read your words
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Post by percy on Jun 3, 2008 8:50:16 GMT -5
you express the pain of desolation well in this writing, this part stands out for me:
"ruthless web
of self-doubt
closing in"
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Jun 3, 2008 9:00:27 GMT -5
thanks Lee. Alicia, Brian, Billy and Percy!
I really appreciate the reads and nice comments
have a great day all!!
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Post by Sharon on Jun 3, 2008 9:08:59 GMT -5
you put much emotion in this piece, so very well-expressed, a pure joy to read
thanks so much for posting....
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Post by Dana on Jun 3, 2008 9:19:23 GMT -5
always a distinct pleasure to read you work, I am so gald I stopped by the site today
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Jun 3, 2008 9:34:28 GMT -5
thanks bunches dear Sharon! I am glad you stopped by too Dana, thanks for  and commenting |
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Post by Reggie on Jun 3, 2008 11:20:13 GMT -5
excellent write Lisa!
hope you'll post more often, I do love your poetry.
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Post by Treasure on Jun 3, 2008 11:24:17 GMT -5
I can sense the hoplessness in this piece, so very well orchestrated
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Post by Bob on Jun 3, 2008 11:36:00 GMT -5
this is a fine write Lisa, is this the poem that is going to be pubished?
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Jun 3, 2008 11:46:46 GMT -5
many thanks Reggie, Treasure and Bob!
no Bob this is not the poem that was published, when the other poem is published I will post a link, take care:)
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Post by trina on Jun 3, 2008 12:32:49 GMT -5
love this!
these lines speak to me:
broken words
strangled by
uncertainty's
grasp
essence of sanity
erased by
insanity's
vise
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Jun 3, 2008 12:35:58 GMT -5
love this! these lines speak to me: broken words strangled by uncertainty's grasp essence of sanity erased by insanity's vise  trina  good to see you here today, have a great week  |
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and commenting 
trina 
all
time for me 
echoes, hope you all are doing well 
Hello everyone, sorry I have been away from the site so long but I was swamped with work 
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Hello everyone, sorry I have been away from the site so long but I was swamped with work 
Aug 5, 2021 14:19:11 GMT -5
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