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Post by Lisa Arnold on Jun 10, 2008 3:39:34 GMT -5
thanks b4, you made my day!
thanks butt3fly, I appreciate the read and nice comment:)
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Post by Jack on Jun 10, 2008 6:45:20 GMT -5
a brilliant write, leaves the reader satisfyed
good description of isolation and desperation
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Jun 10, 2008 11:04:45 GMT -5
thanks Jack!
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Post by Toni on Jun 10, 2008 17:18:38 GMT -5
loved it, Lisa! thanks for posting
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Jun 11, 2008 3:33:30 GMT -5
many thanks toni, for commenting and for the read!
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Post by Brianna on Jun 11, 2008 6:14:42 GMT -5
sorry I missed this when you posted Lisa, but I have been super busy, wonderful write as always!
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Jun 11, 2008 7:42:44 GMT -5
thanks bri and everyone! I am going to lock this thread because it has so many repsonses. I thank you all for all of your kind commnents and for !
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Post by Betty on May 13, 2010 12:43:39 GMT -5
excellent Lisa thanks for posting it for those of us who haven't read it and for those who want to read it again...love it love ya
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Post by Lisa Arnold on May 13, 2010 12:51:35 GMT -5
many thanks Betty!
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Post by Treasure on May 13, 2010 13:39:55 GMT -5
excellent write Lisa, great detail and very engaging I see why it was published love these passages: "broken words strangled by uncertainty's grasp
essence of sanity erased by insanity's vise"thanks for letting us read it again love ya
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Post by b4sunset on May 13, 2010 13:43:49 GMT -5
Piercing, powerful, popping... lisa, i can't have enough of this gift... wow!
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Post by Lisa Arnold on May 13, 2010 14:10:52 GMT -5
excellent write Lisa, great detail and very engaging I see why it was published love these passages: "broken words strangled by uncertainty's grasp
essence of sanity erased by insanity's vise"thanks for letting us read it again love ya Treasure..glad you enjoyed the read again
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Post by Lisa Arnold on May 13, 2010 14:13:22 GMT -5
Piercing, powerful, popping... lisa, i can't have enough of this gift... wow! Hey Nenette thanks so much for commenting and stopping by. It was so nice to see you here I really appreciate your kind words...they mean much to me
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Post by Eddie on May 13, 2010 14:41:41 GMT -5
hey queen of the pen...this is an excellent write love these passages: "broken words strangled by uncertainty's grasp
essence of sanity erased by insanity's vise
weary mind clouded by alcohol haze
into nothingness empty eyes stare"
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Post by Brian on May 13, 2010 14:47:55 GMT -5
just as stunning and beautiful the second time around!
thanks for the great post!
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