FOR ME?

[Lisa Arnold]

thanks so much everyone!


hope you all have a great weekend!

[icee]

very good job!

I like these parts:

"I am the subject
of any Sylvia Plath poem.
I am the reason why people write
stories of despair.

I am the color of pale;
the epitome of loneliness
and the final definition
of a life tragically lost."


thanks for the wonderful read and have a great weekend echoes family!

[Lisa Arnold]

thanks icee!

[Carin]

Lisa, I have felt this way many, many times. I am so grateful you posted this poem again. It truly lifts me up ;D

a fantastic write


I treasure these sections:


"I could disappear and no one
would ever take notice.
I am no longer a person.
I am a mere shadow on the wall,
a brief silhouette in the hollow of night,
an unheard whisper in the wind. "

"I am trapped inside a hollow maze,
not knowing if I want to escape.
I often wonder what my life
would be like if I lived the one I wanted."

"Would I be a poet? A dancer? An artist?
An actress? All of these or none at all?
I’m hopelessly drained of all emotion.
My dreams are suffocating under glass
where I have selfishly placed them."



have a wonderful weekend Echoes Family

[Lisa Arnold]

thank you so much Carin!

[Reggie]

came back for another peep at this great poem, love it!

[Treasure]

another fine write from the gift of your pen, queen Lisa!

[Jack]

magnificent dear queen of the pen


have a wonderful weekend Echoes Family

[ken]

oh write it my sister

I promise to do this for you my queen...love the ending section:


"Don’t become like me,
raise your voice and scream
until you are heard,
get free from your entrapments
and please take a risk,
and above all, dare to dream.

Will you promise to do this for me?"


have a wonderful weekend Echoes

[Billy]

one of fav's by you, I love the message and the easy-flow style, great job!

[Lisa Arnold]

thanks for coming back Reg!

Treasure, Jack, Ken and Billy thanks for commenting!

[Kristi]

my kind of write Lisa...love every word..great job and my belated congrats on the publication!

[Cherrie]

wow, this is so great. I truly appreciate the gift of your pen queen Lisa!

have a wonderful weekend my dear Echoes Family...love you all much!

[Lisa Arnold]

It is so good to hear from you Kristi and Cherrie, your kindess means much to me...love you both [/color]

[Tamika]

wow, this is stellar writing!

thanks for posting!