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Post by Betty on May 15, 2010 14:13:32 GMT -5
 (thank you dear Lisa for the photo  Kiss the Wind
day I
met you
I knew
you were
trouble
ignored
the rumors
and whispers,
went
for lust of
my craving
today I am
heartbroken
and without
the grace
of love
as I kiss
the wind
I am
thankful
you are
gone
©2010 Betty |
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Post by Alicia on May 15, 2010 14:28:35 GMT -5
I am liking this Betty!
oh and I agree it is better to be without than to be with a jackass...good to see you posting again!
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Post by Betty on May 15, 2010 14:42:57 GMT -5
Hey Alicia!  thanks for commenting, and you are so right those jackasses have to go  |
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Post by Alicia on May 15, 2010 14:47:54 GMT -5
you are most welcome Betty! I am off to get ready. Me and hubby are going out to dinner with friends in a few hours....gotta do my nails, my hair, take a shower and decide what to wear...it takes me a really long time to get ready have a great night dear Betty ...love ya bunches  |
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Post by Betty on May 15, 2010 14:52:41 GMT -5
lol, you are so funny Alicia!
thanks and you have a great time!
love you right back!
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Post by Lisa Arnold on May 15, 2010 15:01:23 GMT -5
very well-done Betty  I too am glad to see you posting again  Alicia is too funny thanks for posting Betty |
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Post by Joan on May 15, 2010 15:06:15 GMT -5
good job Betty!
it has even tone and easy flow which I like!
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Post by Reggie on May 15, 2010 15:15:56 GMT -5
very good write Betty!
don't we all do this when we think we are in love:
"ignored
the rumors
and whispers
and went
for the lust
of my craving"
enjoyed, keep posting!
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Post by Betty on May 15, 2010 15:20:27 GMT -5
very well-done Betty I too am glad to see you posting again Alicia is too funny thanks for posting Betty Lisa thanks so much, I always love hearing from you...love ya |
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Post by Betty on May 15, 2010 15:21:43 GMT -5
good job Betty! it has even tone and easy flow which I like!  Joan, your nice comments made me smile |
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Post by Betty on May 15, 2010 15:23:16 GMT -5
very good write Betty! don't we all do this when we think we are in love: "ignored the rumors and whispers and went for the lust of my craving" enjoyed, keep posting! Reggie you are always so supportive and kind. Thanks, and I love ya |
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Post by Bob on May 15, 2010 15:34:46 GMT -5
love the ending!
kiss him goodbye!
great write and good to see you posting!
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Post by trina on May 15, 2010 15:43:08 GMT -5
Betty you have written about what I just went through!
I thank God, he is gone!
I truly love it Betty, thanks!
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Post by Sierra on May 15, 2010 15:52:39 GMT -5
Betty, you have penned a little winner!
good job my dear friend!
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Post by Betty on May 15, 2010 15:59:34 GMT -5
love the ending! kiss him goodbye! great write and good to see you posting! Bob, so good to see you in my thread |
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Alicia is too funny 
Joan, your nice comments made me smile 
and 
all
time for me 
echoes, hope you all are doing well 
