EYES OF SORROW (Sedoka)

Lisa Arnold Administrator Founder Belief is Power! Within a winter's shadow rests mourning's light"...the human soul cannot be permanently chained." - W.E.B. DuBois Believe in You! Posts: 16,456	EYES OF SORROW (Sedoka) Oct 9, 2006 7:30:02 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Lisa Arnold on Oct 9, 2006 7:30:02 GMT -5 much appreciate your nice comment:)
	dreams echo within...

Helen Echoes Family Member Friend of Echoes Bright and Polite Posts: 565	EYES OF SORROW (Sedoka) Oct 9, 2006 19:40:04 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Helen on Oct 9, 2006 19:40:04 GMT -5 nice:)
	"Reaching for my goals"

Lisa Arnold Administrator Founder Belief is Power! Within a winter's shadow rests mourning's light"...the human soul cannot be permanently chained." - W.E.B. DuBois Believe in You! Posts: 16,456	EYES OF SORROW (Sedoka) Oct 10, 2006 18:07:13 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Lisa Arnold on Oct 10, 2006 18:07:13 GMT -5 thanks again Helen
	dreams echo within...

trina Echoes Family Member Barely Surviving Friend of Echoes Ntozake Shange Posts: 802	EYES OF SORROW (Sedoka) Oct 12, 2006 9:18:21 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by trina on Oct 12, 2006 9:18:21 GMT -5 Hey Lisa, it's good to be here again, and you are welcome for the comments:)
	there is no greater power than love of oneself

ken Echoes Senior Member Am I Awake? Friend of Echoes Walter Mosley (writer) Posts: 465	EYES OF SORROW (Sedoka) Oct 13, 2006 6:21:24 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by ken on Oct 13, 2006 6:21:24 GMT -5 sad commentary, nice job

Lisa Arnold Administrator Founder Belief is Power! Within a winter's shadow rests mourning's light"...the human soul cannot be permanently chained." - W.E.B. DuBois Believe in You! Posts: 16,456	EYES OF SORROW (Sedoka) Oct 13, 2006 14:39:43 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Lisa Arnold on Oct 13, 2006 14:39:43 GMT -5 many thanks!
	dreams echo within...

Jay Echoes Family Member Friend of Echoes striving to believe Posts: 622	EYES OF SORROW (Sedoka) Oct 13, 2006 14:56:51 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Jay on Oct 13, 2006 14:56:51 GMT -5 deep write, much enjoyed

dwlackey Echoes Senior Member Posts: 312	EYES OF SORROW (Sedoka) Oct 22, 2006 18:52:32 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by dwlackey on Oct 22, 2006 18:52:32 GMT -5 This is sad but it is the truth thanks for being honest. I liked this.

Lisa Arnold Administrator Founder Belief is Power! Within a winter's shadow rests mourning's light"...the human soul cannot be permanently chained." - W.E.B. DuBois Believe in You! Posts: 16,456	EYES OF SORROW (Sedoka) Oct 24, 2006 19:15:45 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Lisa Arnold on Oct 24, 2006 19:15:45 GMT -5 thanks Jay and dwlackey!
	dreams echo within...

netfolk
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EYES OF SORROW (Sedoka) Nov 1, 2006 20:50:51 GMT -5

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Post by netfolk on Nov 1, 2006 20:50:51 GMT -5

no doubt a painful write Lisa, short but so well describes the desire for the oppressed or the 'opportunity starved' to depart from a hopeless reality. I recall experiencing many of the same scenarios when I was in Gastown B.C. Canada, indeed the brow of despair weeping in the eyes of an orphan town. Peace to you my friend as we must not forget that it still exists and I thank you for reminding me today.

peace as always,
Bernie

Lisa Arnold Administrator Founder Belief is Power! Within a winter's shadow rests mourning's light"...the human soul cannot be permanently chained." - W.E.B. DuBois Believe in You! Posts: 16,456	EYES OF SORROW (Sedoka) Nov 2, 2006 6:56:11 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Lisa Arnold on Nov 2, 2006 6:56:11 GMT -5 Hi Bernie, thank you for the lovely comment! and yes you are correct we must not forget those in need
	dreams echo within...

Reggie Writing Prompt Moderator[/size] Friend of Echoes Posts: 1,400	EYES OF SORROW (Sedoka) May 18, 2010 4:17:43 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Reggie on May 18, 2010 4:17:43 GMT -5 Lisa, your well-crafted poem speaks volumes of truth and is a sad commentary on the plight of many of today's children...excellent write thank you for allowing us to read it again
	Last Edit: May 18, 2010 4:18:18 GMT -5 by Reggie

Lisa Arnold Administrator Founder Belief is Power! Within a winter's shadow rests mourning's light"...the human soul cannot be permanently chained." - W.E.B. DuBois Believe in You! Posts: 16,456	EYES OF SORROW (Sedoka) May 18, 2010 4:28:56 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Lisa Arnold on May 18, 2010 4:28:56 GMT -5 thanks Reg, you are most welcome, and I am so glad you enjoyed the read I always love hearing from you my dear friend
	Last Edit: May 18, 2010 4:29:42 GMT -5 by Lisa Arnold dreams echo within...

Alicia Echoes Family Member Friend of Echoes Living Life! Posts: 883	EYES OF SORROW (Sedoka) May 18, 2010 8:42:35 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Alicia on May 18, 2010 8:42:35 GMT -5 this one is a stunner! a sad write written to perfection, excellent sedoka form...love it! keep them coming!

Joan Echoes Family Member Friend of Echoes Posts: 863	EYES OF SORROW (Sedoka) May 18, 2010 9:52:08 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Joan on May 18, 2010 9:52:08 GMT -5 Lisa you have made a powerful statement made with this wonderfully written sedoka