EYES OF SORROW (Sedoka)

[bridge]

wow, what a great sedoka!

I do not see these much on forums and this is top of the line Lisa!

[Lisa Arnold]

many thanks Alicia, Joan and Dan!

[Dana]

poignant and important write that tells it like it is ;D


excellent write my dear..love ya

[Lisa Arnold]

thanks so much Dana!

[Kristi]

excellent and vitally important write...our children are at stake!

I treasure this poignantly and perfectly penned sedoka poem

[Lisa Arnold]

thanks so much dear Kristi for commenting...

I agree too many children are suffering and it is a sad epidemic

[Kristi]

as long as great writers such as yourself keep bringing it to the forefront, maybe a solution will be discovered, thank you for this fantastic write

I am out...I am still at work...see you tomorrow my friend

[Lisa Arnold]

thank you again dear Kristi and see ya soon!

[Carin]

poignant and meaningful write, always enjoy your poetry, keep posting queen of the pen!

[Lisa Arnold]

a million thanks dear Carin, love ya bunches!

[rico]

this is a stunning and poignant write

thanks for your insight and heart

have a great evening

[Lisa Arnold]

hey rico!

thanks for your support, love ya!

[Lola]

exquisite and precise sedoka poetry

you handle an important and poignant subject with great delicacy...thanks for the great read...have a nice evening

[Lee]

sad write which speaks such truth!

great job Lisa and your form is perfect!

have a great night everyone!

[Lisa Arnold]

thanks Lola and Lee, you both have a great night...love ya both!