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Post by Betty on May 24, 2010 10:01:58 GMT -5
(thanks for the picture Lisa!) SANCTUARY’S RESCUE
sanctuary’s rescue came today
in his arms I am safe
worries blanketed and tucked away
silent cries vanished and gone
heart caressed by succulent kisses
sanctuary’s rescue came for me today
I am safe in his gentle embrace
©Betty
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Post by Tamika on May 24, 2010 10:26:00 GMT -5
lovely write and wonderful image!
this is how I feel everyday with Reggie!
you write very well Betty, thanks for allowing me to read you!
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Post by Betty on May 24, 2010 10:32:00 GMT -5
thanks Tamika!
you are a real sweetheart...we love Reggie around here!
thanks for giving me a read and welcome to the site!
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Post by Tamika on May 24, 2010 10:33:46 GMT -5
thanks for the welcome!
he told me how nice most of you are here, glad to be a part of this wonderful site for writers!
have a good day. I have to get back to work!
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Post by Betty on May 24, 2010 10:36:04 GMT -5
OK Tamika, see ya soon!
I have to get back to work too!
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Post by Lisa Arnold on May 24, 2010 10:40:31 GMT -5
I love this Betty...glad I popped back in for a minute!
the picture looks great!
wonderful write dear one!
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Post by percy on May 24, 2010 10:45:08 GMT -5
what a beautiful write about love Betty!
a true gem here!
Lisa, I see you up here, hurry back dear one!
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Post by Reggie on May 24, 2010 10:51:15 GMT -5
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Post by Joan on May 24, 2010 11:14:08 GMT -5
hello Betty, this is a fine write in my book!!
thanks for the lovely read!
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Post by ken on May 24, 2010 11:27:35 GMT -5
beauty lies within this write my sister of the pen!
excellent job!
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Post by Helen on May 24, 2010 11:35:46 GMT -5
I love this well-written write Betty!
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Post by Sierra on May 24, 2010 11:51:04 GMT -5
oh Betty you have penned a most wonderful wirte about finally finding love!
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Post by Carin on May 24, 2010 12:01:04 GMT -5
beautiful write Betty!
I like these parts:
"worries blanketed and tucked away
silent cries vanished and gone
heart caressed by succulent kisses"
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Post by Betty on May 24, 2010 12:12:22 GMT -5
thanks everyone!
I deeply appreciate all the reads and kind comments!
love all you guys, back to work I go!
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Post by bridge on May 24, 2010 14:06:19 GMT -5
well-written Betty!
love these lines :
"sanctuary’s rescue came for me today
I am safe in his gentle embrace"
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