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Post by Joan on Jun 5, 2010 16:30:20 GMT -5
a very beautifully crafted story dear Lisa it shows that even in the most dire situations belief is something special to behold...fine writing from you my sister of the pen it was a joy to read you this evening
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Post by Sharon on Jun 5, 2010 17:34:53 GMT -5
what a wonderfully written story, great job as always my friend!
it is so sad how some people end up in life, keep blessing us with the gift of your pen!
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Post by Silent-One on Jun 6, 2010 8:36:17 GMT -5
interesting theme and a very well-developed flash fiction story, great job Lisa
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Post by Carin on Jun 6, 2010 8:58:23 GMT -5
Lisa, your story surely captures the heart, a well-composed story!
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Post by Cyndi on Jun 6, 2010 9:02:45 GMT -5
wow, this one stunned me!
I wasn't expecting her to be living in a cardboard box, so sad, but well-written ;D
thanks for sharing
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Post by Brianna on Jun 6, 2010 13:39:56 GMT -5
wonderful story and very well-told, enjoyed this much dear Lisa!
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Post by icee on Jun 7, 2010 6:30:37 GMT -5
fantastic writing!
hope to read stories from you Lisa!
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Jun 7, 2010 7:10:00 GMT -5
thank you all so very much, your warm comments have made my heart smile
thanks everyone for dropping by
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Post by Rose on Jun 7, 2010 7:31:01 GMT -5
wonderfully penned story!
great detail and depth in this brief write, enjoyed!
I remember when Tara posed for that picture, good image choice!
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Post by Reggie on Jun 7, 2010 12:41:15 GMT -5
you are very welcome Lisa
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Post by Billy on Jun 7, 2010 13:50:49 GMT -5
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Post by Treasure on Jun 7, 2010 14:26:23 GMT -5
poignantly told!
fine writing here Lisa...a sad and tough theme but a very important one...great job as always!
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Post by Lee on Jun 7, 2010 16:52:51 GMT -5
this is my favorite flash fiction story by you!
I remember it from another site, and it was good to read it here at Echoes again!
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Post by Cherrie on Jun 7, 2010 18:11:09 GMT -5
a well-crafted story that builds to the conclusion...a very somber theme but well-told enjoyed much
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Post by bridge on Jun 7, 2010 22:01:05 GMT -5
Lisa, you are an amazing storyteller, great read
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