THE GATE

Brian
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Searching for my mind

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THE GATE Jun 8, 2010 22:02:13 GMT -5

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Post by Brian on Jun 8, 2010 22:02:13 GMT -5

(thank you Lisa for the picture)

The Gate

shadows cumulate
beneath hollow moon

cold heart beckons
for love’s facade

tragic hands reach
for grace's escape

demons surround
broken soul

at the gate
heaven awaits

©Brian

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Last Edit: Jun 8, 2010 22:13:54 GMT -5 by Brian

"Trying to succeed"

Betty Haiku/Short Form Monitor[/size] Posts: 1,477	THE GATE Jun 8, 2010 22:23:59 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Betty on Jun 8, 2010 22:23:59 GMT -5 wow what a pretty picture and a great write! it is bref but you say much in these few words, love it! good to see you posting!

Lisa Arnold Administrator Founder Belief is Power! Within a winter's shadow rests mourning's light"...the human soul cannot be permanently chained." - W.E.B. DuBois Believe in You! Posts: 16,456	THE GATE Jun 8, 2010 22:31:41 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Lisa Arnold on Jun 8, 2010 22:31:41 GMT -5 Hey Brian this is an awesome write and it is so wonderful to see you posting again the pic looks good...keep up the good work
	dreams echo within...

Reggie Writing Prompt Moderator[/size] Friend of Echoes Posts: 1,400	THE GATE Jun 8, 2010 22:46:12 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Reggie on Jun 8, 2010 22:46:12 GMT -5 I am loving this Brian! keep posting!

Sierra Echoes Family Member Posts: 847	THE GATE Jun 8, 2010 22:58:51 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Sierra on Jun 8, 2010 22:58:51 GMT -5 great job dear Brian!

Brian Echoes Family Member LonePoet Friend of Echoes Searching for my mind Posts: 1,140	THE GATE Jun 8, 2010 23:05:56 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Brian on Jun 8, 2010 23:05:56 GMT -5 thanks so much Betty, Lisa, Reggie and Sierra and thank you so much Lisa and Echoes for creating The Lounge for us to share our work you guys are so supportive and encouraging...I love you all very much
	Last Edit: Jun 8, 2010 23:07:09 GMT -5 by Brian "Trying to succeed"

Bob Moderator[/size] Haiku Enthusiast! Forever hoping Posts: 2,487	THE GATE Jun 8, 2010 23:19:19 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Bob on Jun 8, 2010 23:19:19 GMT -5 this is quite good Brian! and you are very welcome for the lounge...thank you for participating! we love you too!
	striving to believe in myself

Cherrie Echoes Family Member Friend of Echoes Loving This Beautiful Life Posts: 1,002	THE GATE Jun 8, 2010 23:42:08 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Cherrie on Jun 8, 2010 23:42:08 GMT -5 I enjoyed this much Brian! great image used, and I love the opening lines: "shadows cumulate beneath hollow moon" love you too
	Last Edit: Jun 8, 2010 23:42:58 GMT -5 by Cherrie "Trying to step out of my own way"

Toni Echoes Family Member Haiku Princess KEEPING PEACE WITHIN Friend of Echoes Seeking and Hoping Posts: 744	THE GATE Jun 8, 2010 23:52:46 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Toni on Jun 8, 2010 23:52:46 GMT -5 excellent write!
	"Be kind to those you do not know"

bridge Echoes Family Member Friend of Echoes Posts: 883	THE GATE Jun 9, 2010 9:29:29 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by bridge on Jun 9, 2010 9:29:29 GMT -5 Great write Brian! good to see you posting!

trina Echoes Family Member Barely Surviving Friend of Echoes Ntozake Shange Posts: 802	THE GATE Jun 9, 2010 10:06:59 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by trina on Jun 9, 2010 10:06:59 GMT -5 good imagery and a fine write! love you much!
	there is no greater power than love of oneself

Tamika Echoes Family Member Reggie's wife Posts: 858	THE GATE Jun 9, 2010 10:36:20 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Tamika on Jun 9, 2010 10:36:20 GMT -5 it is so good to see you posting! well-done my friend, love ya!

Brian Echoes Family Member LonePoet Friend of Echoes Searching for my mind Posts: 1,140	THE GATE Jun 9, 2010 10:57:28 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Brian on Jun 9, 2010 10:57:28 GMT -5 thanks everyone I deeply appreciate all the love and the kind words I have to get back to work
	"Trying to succeed"

Rose Echoes Family Member Posts: 562	THE GATE Jun 9, 2010 11:05:15 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Rose on Jun 9, 2010 11:05:15 GMT -5 excellent write dear Brian, you know we love you too!

Alicia Echoes Family Member Friend of Echoes Living Life! Posts: 883	THE GATE Jun 9, 2010 11:34:56 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Alicia on Jun 9, 2010 11:34:56 GMT -5 very well-written! love you much Brian! keep writing!