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Post by Reggie on Jun 9, 2010 11:48:27 GMT -5
this is fine wriirng to me!
I really love these lines:
"cold heart beckons
for love’s facade
tragic hands reach
for grace's escape"
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Post by rico on Jun 9, 2010 14:42:49 GMT -5
good job Brian, I do like this piece!
keep writing and I love you too!
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Post by Sara on Jun 9, 2010 15:44:07 GMT -5
brief write, but well-writen, enjoyed!
love you much!
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Post by b4sunset on Jun 9, 2010 15:56:05 GMT -5
You move me so, brian! whew..  |
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Post by mark on Jun 9, 2010 21:46:20 GMT -5
a gem Brian, good job!
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Post by Brian on Jun 10, 2010 9:39:21 GMT -5
thanks everyone!
I really appreciate the reads and warm comments!
you guys mean much to me, love you all!!
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Post by Rose on Jun 17, 2010 15:55:37 GMT -5
had to read this one again Brian, love it!
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Post by Helen on Jul 25, 2010 15:05:25 GMT -5
 this is fantastic, Brian 
sorry, I missed this one 
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Post by Brianna on Jul 27, 2010 15:21:49 GMT -5
Brian, this is fabulous
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Post by Brian on Jul 27, 2010 16:03:55 GMT -5
had to read this one again Brian, love it! |
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Post by Brian on Jul 27, 2010 16:06:03 GMT -5
that is OK Helen
;D for commenting
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Post by Brian on Jul 27, 2010 16:07:17 GMT -5
Brian, this is fabulous |
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Post by Joy on Aug 1, 2010 10:25:59 GMT -5
excellent Brian  |
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this is fantastic, Brian 
and 
all
time for me 
echoes, hope you all are doing well 
