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Post by Jay on Jun 16, 2010 15:14:02 GMT -5
outstanding wrie, enjoyed the read!
keep up the good work!
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Jun 16, 2010 17:52:00 GMT -5
thanks so muchTrina and Jay
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Post by percy on Jun 16, 2010 18:29:12 GMT -5
wonderfully expressed!
love the picture
thanks for the great read!
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Post by Lola on Jun 16, 2010 18:35:39 GMT -5
I am loving this one Lisa...these sections stand out for me:
"At times, words elude us, leaving only empty thoughts and remnants of our beliefs.
Often, we dance and fall into the arms of misery and grief."
great job dear one!
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Post by Brianna on Jun 16, 2010 19:08:07 GMT -5
great job Lisa!
I always enjoy your writes, keep up the fine work dear one!
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Post by Charles on Jun 16, 2010 23:08:25 GMT -5
I am liking it too Lisa, thanks for sharing!
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Post by Sharon on Jun 16, 2010 23:26:12 GMT -5
:Plove your style Lisa
great piece to read before going to bed
see ya later...love ya
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Post by Cherrie on Jun 17, 2010 1:24:06 GMT -5
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Post by Lee on Jun 17, 2010 1:51:01 GMT -5
good job Lisa
enjoyed the read
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Jun 17, 2010 2:22:00 GMT -5
thanks everyone!
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Post by Lola on Jun 17, 2010 8:44:38 GMT -5
you are welcome Lisa...nice title, I enjoyed this much Lisa
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Jun 17, 2010 9:50:45 GMT -5
thanks Lola!
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Post by Rose on Jun 17, 2010 15:45:39 GMT -5
love this one!
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Post by Bob on Jun 17, 2010 16:15:22 GMT -5
you are quite welcome Lisa
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Post by Toni on Jun 17, 2010 16:57:21 GMT -5
a real gem Lisa I like the changes made, and I enjoyed your lovely poem again these are my fav parts: "Frequently, our hopes, desires and dreams are stolen by the crush of disbelief.
All we love and cherish, we place on the shallow bed of a broken leaf.
And pray within the depths of our precious souls, someone, some day, will offer us gentle release."
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