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Post by Treasure on Jun 26, 2010 12:10:01 GMT -5
I like this form, you did a great job with your first try hope you'll post more
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Post by Lola on Jun 26, 2010 12:40:43 GMT -5
I think you did a good job too, Lisa!
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Jun 26, 2010 12:50:49 GMT -5
many thanks Ken!
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Jun 26, 2010 12:51:18 GMT -5
thanks so much Treasure and Lola!
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Post by Toni on Jun 26, 2010 14:43:19 GMT -5
good job, I enjoyed you this afternoon Lisa!
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Post by Tamika on Jun 26, 2010 14:54:35 GMT -5
I am a fan of your short form poetry, just marvelous
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Post by Sharon on Jun 26, 2010 15:09:32 GMT -5
;D excellent job Lisa
thanks so much for sharing this fine write with us
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Post by Kristi on Jun 26, 2010 15:28:57 GMT -5
I am not too a familiar with this style either, I think you did a great job!
love these lines:
"golden wind chimes sway in breeze"
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Jun 26, 2010 15:42:22 GMT -5
thanks so much Toni, Tamika, Sharon and Kristi
I am going to be off the site until probably early tomorrow morning...have a great weekend everyone
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Post by Billy on Jun 26, 2010 16:01:34 GMT -5
a most beautiful "Whitney" Lisa...keep up the great work [/color]
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Post by Carin on Jun 26, 2010 20:32:33 GMT -5
great poem Lisa, enjoyed much!
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Post by ciara on Jun 26, 2010 21:09:19 GMT -5
a very well-written and crafted Whitney thanks for posting Lisa
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Post by bridge on Jun 26, 2010 21:29:09 GMT -5
I am liking this one from you Lisa!
nice job!
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Post by Charles on Jun 26, 2010 22:57:57 GMT -5
wonderful Lisa!
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Jun 27, 2010 1:50:37 GMT -5
many thanks everyone!
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