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Post by Lisa Arnold on Jul 10, 2010 3:58:37 GMT -5
;D Cyndi
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Post by mark on Jul 10, 2010 7:23:22 GMT -5
Lisa, had to peep at this one again
it gives me much inspiration, beautiful write
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Jul 18, 2010 11:59:48 GMT -5
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Post by b4sunset on Jul 27, 2010 1:01:29 GMT -5
Dang, lisa... i am breathless! welcome to a brave, new world... a knockout of a gift!
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Jul 27, 2010 6:32:53 GMT -5
;D so much Nenette...your kind words have brightened my morning
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Post by Brianna on Jul 27, 2010 15:16:58 GMT -5
wonderful poem Lisa
I had to read this one again...it embraces my soul dear one
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Jul 28, 2010 14:47:32 GMT -5
;D Bri
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Post by Rush on Aug 4, 2010 16:51:33 GMT -5
I loved the quote to begin this poem, I think it was the perfect accompaniment to your piece. The relatively minimal form of this worked well, I think the short lines came across as being spoken with force; while in the beginning that force came from the struggle to survive each of the last five stanzas grew in power and tone, until the wonderful conclusion which is testament to the iron will that lies within.
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Post by Tina on Aug 6, 2010 8:45:26 GMT -5
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Post by Bob on Aug 6, 2010 9:41:44 GMT -5
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Aug 6, 2010 10:00:49 GMT -5
I loved the quote to begin this poem, I think it was the perfect accompaniment to your piece. The relatively minimal form of this worked well, I think the short lines came across as being spoken with force; while in the beginning that force came from the struggle to survive each of the last five stanzas grew in power and tone, until the wonderful conclusion which is testament to the iron will that lies within. Thank you so much Rush for your kind comments...I appreciate you stopping by and giving me a read
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Aug 6, 2010 10:01:36 GMT -5
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Aug 6, 2010 10:04:08 GMT -5
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Post by Joy on Aug 6, 2010 10:24:55 GMT -5
Lisa,
you have written a fine write, and I was hoping it would get the TOTW
CONGRATS to you
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Post by Dana on Aug 6, 2010 12:33:37 GMT -5
beautiful gem of a poem Lisa, told with much heart
CONGRATS on your award
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