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Post by Lisa Arnold on Jul 13, 2010 1:24:37 GMT -5
 ANOTHER CHILD, ANOTHER MOTHER – an etheree
Dark
pathway
leads nowhere
dirty-slick streets
wet with August rain
gunshot in near distance
another child lies dying
cut down by the hand of a friend
ambulance rushes, but it’s too late
another mother cries for her dead son.
©2010 Lisa Arnold
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Post by Betty on Jul 13, 2010 1:29:48 GMT -5
a tough theme, but brilliantly and elegantly written 
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Jul 13, 2010 1:35:09 GMT -5
thanks so much Betty!
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Post by Kristi on Jul 13, 2010 2:03:41 GMT -5
 outstanding Lisa 
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Jul 13, 2010 2:17:07 GMT -5
a tough theme, but brilliantly and elegantly written  |
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Jul 13, 2010 2:18:00 GMT -5
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Post by rico on Jul 13, 2010 2:28:14 GMT -5
fantastic writing Lisa...an important and poignant theme written with soul and grace
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Jul 13, 2010 2:34:33 GMT -5
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Post by Alicia on Jul 13, 2010 2:59:42 GMT -5
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Post by Rose on Jul 13, 2010 3:01:22 GMT -5
wonderful write, told from the heart of your soul, dear one
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Post by Reggie on Jul 13, 2010 5:10:19 GMT -5
a most powerful and poignant write that says so much in this short form...excellent job
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Jul 13, 2010 5:24:50 GMT -5
;D so much Alicia 
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Jul 13, 2010 5:25:47 GMT -5
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Jul 13, 2010 5:26:50 GMT -5
;D dear Reg
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Post by Dana on Jul 13, 2010 5:59:23 GMT -5
fantastic write, touches the heart
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outstanding Lisa 
magnificent writing Lisa 
and 
all
time for me 
echoes, hope you all are doing well 
