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Post by Lisa Arnold on Jul 16, 2010 4:52:36 GMT -5
NEW DAY’S BIRTH - a pensee
the grace
of water’s warmth
offers peaceful salvation
for a life mired in failure;
new day’s birth absolves sins
©2010 Lisa Arnold
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Post by rico on Jul 16, 2010 5:23:17 GMT -5
 wow, this is fine writing Lisa 
at times, we all need to wash away our ills and embrace a new birth 
love the image 
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Jul 16, 2010 5:26:24 GMT -5
;D Rico, I really appreciate the kind words...love ya  
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Post by Reggie on Jul 16, 2010 5:50:43 GMT -5
::)fine writing Lisa
I love the picture
as always, my queen
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Post by Betty on Jul 16, 2010 5:56:27 GMT -5
very well-crafted
I enjoyed this much
nice image
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Post by Sierra on Jul 16, 2010 6:20:48 GMT -5
fantastic Lisa 
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Post by Tamika on Jul 16, 2010 6:36:43 GMT -5
beautifully written Lisa, told with much compassion and strength \
the lovely image you chose enhances your theme
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Post by icee on Jul 16, 2010 7:08:49 GMT -5
fabulous my dear lady
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Post by Charles on Jul 16, 2010 12:14:18 GMT -5
wonderful poem Lisa, written with much grace and elegance, nice job
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Post by Lee on Jul 16, 2010 12:36:59 GMT -5
excellent write Lisa
good to see it getting so many reads and responses...wonderful write
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Jul 16, 2010 14:06:17 GMT -5
;D Reg
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Jul 16, 2010 14:07:32 GMT -5
;D Betty
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Jul 16, 2010 14:09:33 GMT -5
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Jul 16, 2010 14:12:17 GMT -5
;D Tami
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Jul 16, 2010 14:13:02 GMT -5
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wow, this is fine writing Lisa 
and 
all
time for me 
echoes, hope you all are doing well 
