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Post by Tamika on Jul 20, 2010 18:30:29 GMT -5
Truth or Illusion?
call my name
in morning light
sensuous touch
his lips on mine
bodies pulsating
in hot rhythm
keeping time
breath hot
on nape of neck
words whispered
deep within
the sense of
urgency's rescue
beckons
I ask myself
is this truth
or illusion?
©2010 Tamika
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Post by Bob on Jul 20, 2010 18:46:42 GMT -5
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Jul 20, 2010 19:00:18 GMT -5
fantastic write 
;D for posting  
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Post by Reggie on Jul 20, 2010 19:05:27 GMT -5
 Tami, baby, you hit this one out of the park 
 I love it
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Post by Dana on Jul 20, 2010 19:10:33 GMT -5
wow, an excellent write Tami
I do enjoy your writes
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Post by percy on Jul 21, 2010 4:27:33 GMT -5
a fine write dear Tami
I did enjoy the read 
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Post by Tamika on Jul 21, 2010 5:25:46 GMT -5
;D so much Bob, your words of kindness mean much to me
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Post by rico on Jul 21, 2010 5:28:53 GMT -5
beautifully expressed dear Tami
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Post by Tamika on Jul 21, 2010 5:29:22 GMT -5
;D so much dear sweet Lisa
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Post by Tamika on Jul 21, 2010 5:32:58 GMT -5
;D my love Reg
you are the inspiration and heart of everything I write
I am blessed to have you as my dear husband
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Post by Tamika on Jul 21, 2010 5:34:54 GMT -5
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Post by Tamika on Jul 21, 2010 5:38:56 GMT -5
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Post by Sierra on Jul 21, 2010 5:59:07 GMT -5
Tami, this is fantastic writing
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Post by trina on Jul 21, 2010 6:42:09 GMT -5
wonderful poetry Tami
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Post by Eddie on Jul 21, 2010 6:43:07 GMT -5
I really enjoyed  this one Tami...fantastic write
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very well-expressed Tami 
Tami, baby, you hit this one out of the park 
this one Tami...fantastic write 
and 
all
time for me 
echoes, hope you all are doing well 
