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Post by Brian on Sept 2, 2010 14:21:31 GMT -5
ABYSS
wanton hands
beg for mercy
a broken heart
breathes within
vacant soul
grief dances boldly
as ancient prophecy
is scattered among
the ruins of a tortured life
greed of man wastes no time,
hopelessly, I fall into
the abyss
©Brian
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Post by ken on Sept 2, 2010 14:25:32 GMT -5
wow, Brian this is my kind of write, great poetry 
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Post by Betty on Sept 2, 2010 14:26:42 GMT -5
your words grab a hold of me, fantastic write 
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Sept 2, 2010 14:43:51 GMT -5
Brian, I applaud your wonderful write ;D for posting 
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Post by Dana on Sept 2, 2010 15:23:45 GMT -5
fantastico my friend 
love these lines:
"grief dances boldly
as ancient prophecy
is scattered among
the ruins of a tortured life"
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Post by Brian on Sept 2, 2010 16:11:25 GMT -5
wow, Brian this is my kind of write, great poetry  |
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Post by Brian on Sept 2, 2010 16:12:06 GMT -5
your words grab a hold of me, fantastic write |
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Post by Brian on Sept 2, 2010 16:13:31 GMT -5
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Post by Brian on Sept 2, 2010 16:16:28 GMT -5
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Post by Billy on Sept 2, 2010 16:35:33 GMT -5
wow, you set this one off Brian!
excellent write!
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Post by icee on Sept 3, 2010 15:45:20 GMT -5
very good job Brian!
it was so good to read you this evening!
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Post by Bob on Sept 3, 2010 17:22:13 GMT -5
excelent job Brian!
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Post by Tina on Sept 4, 2010 1:15:07 GMT -5
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Post by Tamika on Sept 4, 2010 12:20:15 GMT -5
CONGRATS to you Brian!
excellent job!!
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Post by Silent-One on Sept 4, 2010 17:37:51 GMT -5
:oCONGRATS Brian  [/color][/size] excellent write and choice for TOAST OF THE WEEK
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excellent poem Brian 
CONGRATS to you...we have picked your lovely poem for the TOAST OF THE WEEK 
and 
all
time for me 
echoes, hope you all are doing well 
