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Lisa Arnold Administrator Founder Belief is Power! Within a winter's shadow rests mourning's light"...the human soul cannot be permanently chained." - W.E.B. DuBois Believe in You! Posts: 16,456	BROKEN Nov 12, 2010 18:12:07 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Lisa Arnold on Nov 12, 2010 18:12:07 GMT -5 Nov 8, 2010 2:48:12 GMT -5 Billy said: a beauty of a poem, loved the read! thanks so much Billy
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Lisa Arnold Administrator Founder Belief is Power! Within a winter's shadow rests mourning's light"...the human soul cannot be permanently chained." - W.E.B. DuBois Believe in You! Posts: 16,456	BROKEN Nov 12, 2010 18:14:11 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Lisa Arnold on Nov 12, 2010 18:14:11 GMT -5 Nov 8, 2010 4:49:55 GMT -5 Tamika said: outstanding write Lisa I like this part: "Sensing you craving my kiss on the full of your wanton lips takes away my sins, and I offer them to ominous winds." ;D dear Tami, love ya
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Lisa Arnold Administrator Founder Belief is Power! Within a winter's shadow rests mourning's light"...the human soul cannot be permanently chained." - W.E.B. DuBois Believe in You! Posts: 16,456	BROKEN Nov 12, 2010 18:16:20 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Lisa Arnold on Nov 12, 2010 18:16:20 GMT -5 Nov 8, 2010 11:43:22 GMT -5 johan said: A wonderful yet rather sad poem Lisa, a tribute indeed. Johan Thanks so much Andrew, great to hear from you
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Nov 12, 2010 18:18:33 GMT -5

Nov 8, 2010 19:29:37 GMT -5 macmcgovern said:

I was broken before
you opened the door.
I am healed from within
and breathing life again.

I love your ability to convey our ability to overcome. In four short lines, you describe the entire spectrum of pain and suffering, recovery, and love and salvation. Well done. A superbly written poem that has a significant impact on the reader.

thank you so much, your kind wordsa have made my day and my whole weekend

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Charles Echoes Family Member Friend of Echoes It's me "blue" Posts: 605	BROKEN Jan 19, 2011 7:02:22 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Charles on Jan 19, 2011 7:02:22 GMT -5 great changes to this one Lisa, love the picture, well-crafted

Reggie Writing Prompt Moderator[/size] Friend of Echoes Posts: 1,400	BROKEN Jan 19, 2011 7:02:38 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Reggie on Jan 19, 2011 7:02:38 GMT -5 beautiful job Lisa!

Tamika Echoes Family Member Reggie's wife Posts: 858	BROKEN Jan 19, 2011 7:13:33 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Tamika on Jan 19, 2011 7:13:33 GMT -5 Hi Lisa, I love this one again and I like the changes that you made, great flow!

Dana Echoes Family Member Friend of Echoes beginning again Posts: 983	BROKEN Jan 19, 2011 7:19:20 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Dana on Jan 19, 2011 7:19:20 GMT -5 loving this Lisa, great to read it again!

ciara Echoes Family Member Motivated by Passion Friend of Echoes Posts: 821	BROKEN Jan 19, 2011 7:37:57 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by ciara on Jan 19, 2011 7:37:57 GMT -5 love this great changes
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Eddie Echoes Family Member Friend of Echoes Am I here? Posts: 860	BROKEN Jan 19, 2011 9:06:13 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Eddie on Jan 19, 2011 9:06:13 GMT -5 loving it Lisa, thanks for sharing the revised version!

icee Echoes Family Member Veiled Emotions Friend of Echoes striving and reaching Posts: 661	BROKEN Jan 19, 2011 15:42:29 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by icee on Jan 19, 2011 15:42:29 GMT -5 I love it too, well-done Lisa!
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Lisa Arnold Administrator Founder Belief is Power! Within a winter's shadow rests mourning's light"...the human soul cannot be permanently chained." - W.E.B. DuBois Believe in You! Posts: 16,456	BROKEN Jan 19, 2011 16:42:47 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Lisa Arnold on Jan 19, 2011 16:42:47 GMT -5 Jan 19, 2011 7:02:22 GMT -5 Charles said: great changes to this one Lisa, love the picture, well-crafted thanks Charles
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Lisa Arnold Administrator Founder Belief is Power! Within a winter's shadow rests mourning's light"...the human soul cannot be permanently chained." - W.E.B. DuBois Believe in You! Posts: 16,456	BROKEN Jan 19, 2011 16:44:14 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Lisa Arnold on Jan 19, 2011 16:44:14 GMT -5 Jan 19, 2011 7:02:38 GMT -5 Reggie said: beautiful job Lisa! thanks Reg
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Lisa Arnold Administrator Founder Belief is Power! Within a winter's shadow rests mourning's light"...the human soul cannot be permanently chained." - W.E.B. DuBois Believe in You! Posts: 16,456	BROKEN Jan 19, 2011 16:45:23 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Lisa Arnold on Jan 19, 2011 16:45:23 GMT -5 Jan 19, 2011 7:13:33 GMT -5 Tamika said: Hi Lisa, I love this one again and I like the changes that you made, great flow! thanks dear Tami
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Lisa Arnold Administrator Founder Belief is Power! Within a winter's shadow rests mourning's light"...the human soul cannot be permanently chained." - W.E.B. DuBois Believe in You! Posts: 16,456	BROKEN Jan 19, 2011 16:46:34 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Lisa Arnold on Jan 19, 2011 16:46:34 GMT -5 Jan 19, 2011 7:19:20 GMT -5 Dana said: loving this Lisa, great to read it again! many thanks dear Dana
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