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Post by Lisa Arnold on Jun 24, 2010 23:15:37 GMT -5
NIGHT in the CITY - pensee
clear sky
warm evening
foot-fall echo on asphalt
city night life, glow of bright lights
cocktails, music, dancing
© 2010 Lisa Arnold
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Post by Betty on Jun 25, 2010 0:03:22 GMT -5
another great write from you dear Lisa, thanks for the post!
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Jun 25, 2010 0:09:17 GMT -5
thanks so much Betty!
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Post by Bob on Jun 25, 2010 1:28:50 GMT -5
another fine pensee!
you have a true feel for this form, great job Lisa!
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Jun 25, 2010 1:31:48 GMT -5
thanks so much Bob!
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Post by ciara on Jun 25, 2010 2:00:33 GMT -5
very visual and well-crafted pensee poetry!
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Jun 25, 2010 2:10:36 GMT -5
thanks so much sweet Ciara!
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Post by percy on Jun 25, 2010 2:52:53 GMT -5
 I can sense this one Lisa, a very well-expressed poem 
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Post by Joan on Jun 25, 2010 5:07:04 GMT -5
well done Lisa I like this line: "foot-fall echo on asphalt" |
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Post by Alicia on Jun 25, 2010 6:32:41 GMT -5
a gem Lisa!
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Post by Tamika on Jun 25, 2010 6:53:23 GMT -5
lovely Lisa |
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Post by rico on Jun 25, 2010 6:54:29 GMT -5
great job dear one!
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Post by Reggie on Jun 25, 2010 7:38:47 GMT -5
brilliant pensee Lisa!
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Post by Sierra on Jun 25, 2010 8:08:18 GMT -5
terrific write, Lisa ;D
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Post by Eddie on Jun 25, 2010 8:19:07 GMT -5
nice write Lisa!
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all
time for me 
echoes, hope you all are doing well 
Hello everyone, sorry I have been away from the site so long but I was swamped with work 
Aug 5, 2021 14:19:11 GMT -5
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Hello everyone, sorry I have been away from the site so long but I was swamped with work 
Aug 5, 2021 14:19:11 GMT -5
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