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Post by Lisa Arnold on Feb 10, 2011 6:20:12 GMT -5
 LAST KISS GOODBYE – an etheree
hand
in hand
in silence
they slowly walk
down a vacant bridge
blustery winds echo
he senses an end is near
she wonders if their love will last
intense moonlight glares down upon them
illuminating their last kiss goodbye
©2011 Lisa Arnold
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Post by Reggie on Feb 10, 2011 6:42:45 GMT -5
well-crafted write Lisa!
sad, but some relationships do not last, enjoyed the read sunshine!
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Post by Dana on Feb 10, 2011 6:49:58 GMT -5
great job Lisa, enjoyed  this one 
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Feb 10, 2011 6:55:56 GMT -5
well-crafted write Lisa!
sad, but some relationships do not last, enjoyed the read sunshine!   |
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Post by ken on Feb 10, 2011 6:56:35 GMT -5
i like this one too!
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Feb 10, 2011 6:56:53 GMT -5
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Feb 10, 2011 6:58:11 GMT -5
thanks Ken
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Post by rico on Feb 10, 2011 7:08:34 GMT -5
wonderful writing!
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Feb 10, 2011 7:10:29 GMT -5
thanks Ken 
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Feb 10, 2011 7:11:30 GMT -5
thanks Rico
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Post by Sara on Feb 10, 2011 7:19:58 GMT -5
well-expressed and written etheree Lisa
good to read you this morning
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Feb 10, 2011 7:27:50 GMT -5
thanks so much for commenting dear Sara!
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Post by Kristi on Feb 10, 2011 7:50:37 GMT -5
a gem Lisa, love every word!
you have mastered the etheree my friend!
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Feb 10, 2011 7:51:30 GMT -5
thanks Kristi!
the etheree is one of my favorite forms to write:)
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Post by Kristi on Feb 10, 2011 7:51:54 GMT -5
good to know, you write them well, have a great day.
I am off to work:)
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this one 
and 
all
time for me 
echoes, hope you all are doing well 
