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Post by Lisa Arnold on Mar 13, 2011 5:46:49 GMT -5
BEAUTIFUL MEMORY
within an awakening dawn or an amazing golden sunset, I sense the graceful presence of you
in the blush of an afternoon breeze or in the song of a red robin perched on a twisting vine, I feel the grace of your presence
inside the hum of a late night wind I hear your encouraging words delicately whispered in my ear
within my thoughts your voice echoes I sense your hand guiding this pen I hold as it's tip stokes this blank piece of paper
my struggles are not over, the road leading to my dreams will not be easy to find, but I am whole again and will strive to cradle success in my hands
dear father, as I mourn the first year of your passing, I celebrate the precious gifts of will, strength and determination you have, graciously, instilled in me
forever, I will remember all you have taught me and will always hold your beautiful memory within my longing soul
©2011 Lisa Arnold
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Post by Brianna on Mar 13, 2011 6:03:19 GMT -5
oh my Lisa, this is just fantastic writing... very heartfelt and well-expressed...I love it
a wonderful tribute the beautiful memory of your dad, he is smiling down at you after your wonderful poem, I am sure
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Mar 13, 2011 6:05:25 GMT -5
thanks so much dear Bri, you always know just what to say
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Post by Kristi on Mar 13, 2011 6:44:40 GMT -5
WOW Lisa, fantastic and very touching
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Mar 13, 2011 6:55:29 GMT -5
WOW Lisa, fantastic and very touching thanks co much dear Kristi
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Post by Reggie on Mar 13, 2011 7:39:23 GMT -5
beautifully penned Lisa
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Post by Alicia on Mar 13, 2011 8:01:34 GMT -5
a very gracious write that is well-expressed
stay strong and looking forward
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Mar 13, 2011 9:27:59 GMT -5
beautifully penned Lisa thanks Reg
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Mar 13, 2011 9:30:00 GMT -5
\ many thanks Alicia
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Post by mark on Mar 13, 2011 11:26:14 GMT -5
excellent write, told from the heart and soul of s true poet, I feel you on this one, keep the faith!
I sent you a PM:)
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Mar 13, 2011 11:45:44 GMT -5
thanks Mark!
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Post by trina on Mar 13, 2011 15:03:22 GMT -5
marvelous writing Lisa!
much love to you!
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Mar 13, 2011 16:10:24 GMT -5
marvelous writing Lisa! much love to you! thanks Trina
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Post by Toni on Mar 13, 2011 16:21:55 GMT -5
written with such eloquence and control, a most beautiful and heart tugging piece
much love to you Lisa
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Mar 13, 2011 16:32:52 GMT -5
many thanks Toni!
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